All have been laid to rest, all expect memories. Throughout the years, shinobi - men and women - have learned how to preserve the memories of thousand of great shinobi that have lived, and then have passed. Though, they never managed to gain the memories of Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, and Uchiha Sasuke. These three ninjas are wildly known as the Three Heroes of the world. They are the mirror images of their legendary Sannin teachers, and touched everyone's life in some sort of way. Their memory though has been scattered across the world, and the pieces of their chakra find themselves locked away in certain men and women, wildly known as the Kages of today. They are the shadows and guardians of today's new era, and they seem to wait for something to happen.
They await for Madara Uchiha to return, the Fourth Shinobi War had been created by none ever than Obito Uchiha, Kakashi's old friend whom he thought had died. In this war, numerous men and women died trying to protect all that they thought was right and true, in the end - Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke had perished by giving up their lives to kill Madara and Obito Uchiha. Their chakra awoken a sleeping God, whom took the combined power of the ten bijuu, kurama and the eight tailed bijuu's life source and basically recreated life anew. These memories however, are gone, and cannot be recreated or found in any memory book, or even in text. This story is being told through the combined chakra fragments of the Legendary Heroes that each Kage takes upon their death and inserts into a crystal fragment.
However, life as everyone now knows, is finally changing. Kazengakure and Hyozangakure had finally came to an agreement of forming a grand alliance between their villages, rumored that they were related by distant cousins, this alliance would be greater than any had ever seen. The day of the treaty being signed, and thus the festival on the island of Heiwa, a new danger had awaken that day. The Sage of Six Paths was unable to keep a dark entity in slumber from the grave and beyond; a new five tailed bijuu - the Hydra - had awoken. In a fit of rage and unknown, the Hydra destroyed half of the festival grounds, killing more than five thousand civilians and shinobi alike. The Bijuu set it's eyes on the building where the witnessing six kages were located, and destroyed the entire building.
Three months had passed, and Sannins of each village filled the spots of the Kages, as many hoped that one day there would be news that someone had survived the attack. Only the Hyozangakure's kage had returned, apparently unaware of what happened. Because of this, many of the villages have returned hostile towards each other, many blaming Hyozengakure for the attack that killed each of the Kage's. Slowly, men and women of each village are elected to fill the Kage spots of each of the village, alliances are being forged and mended. But can anyone form a great alliance to take down Hydria, and once again, scatter all of the tailed beasts across the world?
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Name: Hakai
Middle: NONE
Surname: Inuzuka
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: STRAIGHT (why is this important in an app?>?)
Overall Appearance: Hakai is six foot, five inches and just under two hundred and twenty-five pounds. He is a a tall man, and rather built. He has a very tone skin and is completely covered chiseled in muscles. He is in no way buff, but has a strong slim build. He isn't rippling with massive muscles and doesn't have much bulk. But despite this he is well built, with broad shoulders and strong limbs. His body is perfectly textured as he is a work out maniac. Hakai has auburn dark brown hair with a long pony tail that hangs down his back wildly. The rest of his hair also dangle wildly and is tussled around everywhere. He has piercing animal brown eyes, that are bright and can be seen clearly by all. They have a cannibalistic shine to them as they are vertically slanted, like a wild animal.
His skin is not bare however, its covered in 100s of ink tattoos, from his back to chest, wrists, hands, feet, and even in his mouth. They are each a unique seal that Hakai sealed upon his body. They are on every inch of his body, he uses them from his unique weaponry style. If he uses up the sealed items for one of his tattoos he can simply reseal more items in the permanent seals on his body. Though have seals on his back or other areas don't make sense to most, he has a unique fighting style using his projectile mastery in unison with his other techniques.
Hakai is tan from spending much of his days in the sun, very little clothes if any. He often sun baths on top of the Mizukage Mansion, simply because he can. He is almost always seen without a shirt on and in a pair of shorts; but no matter what clothes he is wearing he is seen with Samehada on his back. Even when he goes swimming or surfing he can be seen with Samehada on his back. He never wears his official jounin uniform around the village. He normally wears a self made robe around the village with the words "Big Pimp'in" on the back; always wears nothing but short or underwear beneath it. Still remaining shirtless most of the time. Hakai normally walks barefoot everywhere, even to important meetings. But in battle he is seen in his full uniform. *character picture* As with his personality his clothing attire changes based on what he is doing. If need he will wear full battle uniform.
Overall Personality: Hakai is laid back and carefree for the most part. He always has a jovial behavior even in fights or battles. He is also very charismatic and avert to praising other, including enemies or other people not from his village. He believe any extraordinary jutsu or ability deserves praise and honor. He is a kind man and believes the best in people. He even gets excited if an opponents has great skill or does a powerful attack. But for the most part Hakai just swims in the ocean and goes surfing. He doesn't care for work. He is a carefree elite ninja, and is best described as a beach bum.
But despite these positive behaviors Hakai has a serious side. He has strong concern for the people of his friends and his family. He hates the thought have having to battle his fellow allied ninja. But if they to turn against him he would have no hesitation in killing them. Anyone who endangers his clan and the people of it, will be his enemies. He remembers enemies for life if you get on his bad side, there is no chance of getting off of it. He dislikes people who are always series, or are over cocky in their power. He believe that you should never brag, but let you abilities and skills speak for themselves.
On top of his serious side Hakai is a completely different person in battle. He can be describe as a relentless demon, ruthless and cunning in his battle strategies. In war young teens and experienced adults are blurred to him. It is all based on the headband and the side they fight on. He will slay an enemy without a second thought or a single thought of mercy. Because of his war experience and his ability to be a perfect shinobi. Which is why outside of battle he takes such a relaxed approach to life. For Hakai knows all to well that the ninja world cannot have peace forever. He is always read to step up when his village and country needs him.
likes: fighting, canines, swords, power, friends, meat
Dislikes: Akatsuki, vegetarians, vegetables, cowards, cockiness
Catch Phrase: Congratulations..... Now I am going to kill you.
I.D. U N K N O W N "Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."
Village: Hidden Hidden in the Mist
Rank: Akatsuki S rank Missing Ninja
Bloodline: Inuzuka Clan
Elements: Lightning, Water, and Earth
Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Weaponry
B L O O D . T Y P E "He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."
Name: Inuzuka
Clan Type: Shinobi
Kekkei Genkai: None
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The members are given their own canine partner(s) when they reach a certain age. Thereafter, the shinobi and their dog(s) are practically inseparable. The shinobi and canine allies fight using collaboration jutsu, such as the Fang Passing Fang amongst others that take advantage of their teamwork. The clan members are also able to communicate with canines even if unlike Kuromaru, the dogs cannot talk. The members of this clan, much like their canine partners have greatly enhanced senses especially the sense of smell. By concentrating chakra to their noses this is amplified to an even greater extent allowing the user to be able to detect, track and monitor targets from a fair distance away
Clan Element: none
Clan History: The Inuzuka clan (犬塚一族, Inuzuka Ichizoku) or Inuzuka family (犬塚家, Inuzuka-ke) is known for their use of ninken as fighting companions and are easily identified by the distinctive red fang markings on their cheeks. They were once prominent in the LEAF village, when Marada took over the world their clan leader join his forces.
The members are also given their own canine partner(s) when they reach a certain age. Thereafter, the shinobi and their dog(s) are practically inseparable. It would seem that due to the bond between an Inuzuka and their canine partner(s), their chakra is allowed to mix, and is shared between them, adding a feral appearance to the human partners, and makes a bond between them that affords them the use of the clan's collaboration jutsu, such as the Fang Passing Fang. The clan members are also able to communicating with canines even if unlike Kuromaru, the dogs cannot talk.
P A S S E D & L E A R N E D "He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"Elemental Jutsu[s]
[color]Earth Jutsu[/color]
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Doton: Doryūsō [Earth Release: Rising Stone Spears]
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Requirements: None
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes can penetrate targets of great density.
Doton: Domu [Earth Release: Earth Spear]
Rank: B
Range: Self
Requirements: None
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body, which hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user's skin becomes much darker, an almost black color. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique.
Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu [Earth Clone Technique]
Rank: B
Range: Short
Requirements: None
Description: This technique creates a clone made of mud of the user. Since its made of mud, it can continue to reform and mold itself back to its original shape.
Element: Earth Release: Earth Spear
Type: defensive
Rank: B
DescriptionThe user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin as hard as steel. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu. Hakai is able to use this jutsu with out forming a sign.
Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: C-B
Range: personal
Requirements: none
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is also up to the user. Other than being moved below ground — relative to the surrounding surface — the terrain is not altered as plant life and people retain their same positions.
Earth Release: Rock Shelter
Rank: B
Range: Short to Mid
Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique. The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside.
Doton: Yomi Numa [Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld]
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Requirements: None
Description: By changing the surface of an object (ground, ceiling, wall, etc.) beneath an enemy (relative to them) into mud and creating a swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from there. The size and depth of the created varies, however it will is possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or having to face gigantic creatures.
Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique
Rank: c-A
Range: personal
Requirements: none
Description: By encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power. The advanced form of this technique can send a giant summoning in the air with a punch. It is a highly condensed attack showing the true power of earth chakra.
Mogura Tataki no Jutsu [Whac-A-Mole Technique]
Rank: A
Range: Short
Requirements: None
Description: The user uses their Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique to move around the battle field and pop up in front of his target before whacking them. Unlike its parent technique, however, this jutsu is used to quickly attack multiple opponents in succession.
Earth Release: Sandwich Technique
Rank: S
Range: All ranges
Requirements: touching the ground
Description: The user creates two enormous rock formations that close in on the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous force, smashing everything caught in between. Both of these formations are capable of dwarfing even the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path in size, and each one has the symbol of the user's village or organization inscribed upon it. Kitsuchi stated that this was his strongest technique, standing as a testament to both this ability's destructive potential and its difficulty.
Water Jutsu
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Name: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu - Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.
Name: Water Style: Water Clone Projectiles Mizu no kurōn hassha
Element: Water
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Requirements: Shurikens ( or any other tools )
Description: user throws 1 shuriken ( or any other tool ) and makes hand seals to make copies of them with Water chakra. Just like shadow clones but made of water. They will stay as shurkin even after they hit.
Name: Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Name: Multi Water Clones (Maruchiu~ōtākurōn)
Element: water
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Description: An Advanced form of water clones. It allows the user to make 100s of water clones and require a vast more amount of chakra. But its a useful technique. These clones are the same as normal water clones in strength.
Great Water Prison (Subarashi)
Element: Water
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Description: Similar to the jutsu of water prison. The user or the user's clone creates a much larger water prison. It is large enough to capture a giant summoning so they can no longer move. It is basically a large water prison jutsu.
Name: Baku Suishouha - Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel water from his/her gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water.
Great Swirling Water Force (Idaina senkai ōtāfōsu)
Element: water
Type: defensive
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range: Short - long
Description: This defensive and offensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The amount of water is that of Bursting Water Wave jutsu. The water is summoned in front of Hakai, the water going counter clock wise around the Hakai, to block a incoming attack. Once the jutsu or attack is blocked the swirling water wall infused with water chakra blast forward goes around Hakai with great force and is sent at the opponent. The water has enough force to smash through solid rock. It is able to easily block elemental attacks, because of its size. It also is able to absorb lightning techniques due to water being conductive and thus increasing its attack range.
Name: Senjikizame - Thousand Sharks Eating
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton (Water)
Description: The user will form the needed hand seals and then place their hand to the surface of the water. One thousand sharks made of water will emerge to create a wall formation, raining down to attack the opponent.
[Lightning jutsu
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Lightning Release: Zues's spit
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Hakai forms lightning chakra in his mouth. From there he proceeds to spit it out with great speed, in the form of needles. He is able to fire them out with great accuracy and is able to hit even kunai out of the air with a needle. This jutsu roughly fires 50 needles in a single shot. If they hit a person they has equal cutting power to a senbon, but give a high shot. If enough hit the user in a certain area it will be go numb.
Name of Jutsu: Lightning Release: Flash Armor
Rank: B
Type: ninjutsu
Description: The user covers themselves in lightning chakra like a cloak. Every time they make a move from that point a flash will come from the friction. Allowing them to run and create a strobe like effect around them. If they were to do rolls on the ground they would flash all over. The technique does effect the users and flashes are equal to that of a flash bomb.
Note: this jutsu lasts 3 posts.
Lightning Release: Lightning Armor Amplifier
Rank: B
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Description: Hakai covers himself in lightning completely, but not to the degree of lightning armor. His cloak of lightning chakra allows him to strike with far more power, but not speed. The jutsu also allows him to send bolts of lightning from his body if he spins. Making this an ideal technique to use with one of Hakai's clan techniques.
Name of Jutsu: Lightning Release: False Darkness(Raiton: Gian)
Rank: A
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Element Raiton(Lightning)
Description: The user emits lightning in the shape of a spear from his/her mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock, meaning it has a high killing potential. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
Clan Jutsu
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Dynamic Marking (Dainamikku Maakingu)
Character Use: Akamaru
Rank: E
Dynamic Marking is a technique used by the Inuzuka clan. When their canine partners release a stream of urine on their target, the clan member can use their excellent sense of smell to locate their target no matter where they are. The urine itself is more dangerous than normal urine, because of its burning and strong sticky qualities.
This technique is mainly used as a set up for the Soutourou technique. When the clan member and canine familiar are spinning at such high speeds they are unable to see where they are going, but by using their nose they are able to locate their target with little trouble.
Garouga - Dual Wolf Fang
Character Use: Akamaru, Inuzuka Kiba
Rank: B
Description: Garouga is one of the ultimate Taijutsu techniques of the Inuzuka Clan. The technique is a super-spin and it uses up a massive amount of chakra, rendering the ninja and his dog almost helpless should the technique fail.
The clan member familiar will first mark their target with the Dainamikku Maakingu technique. Then by using Inuzuka Ryuu Chinjuu Konbi Henge, the clan member and his partner will transform into the Soutou Rou, "Two-Headed Wolf." This huge beast has several advantages, the saliva it emits will make it difficult for their opponent to find footing in the surrounding area. The large size of the beast also causes large amounts of penetrating damage when it begins its spin. Unfortunately they spin so fast they are unable to keep track of their vision. So they must entirely rely on their nose and the urine marking. If Garouga connects with the target, the opponent is ripped to pieces. Also even if they do not connect directly, the surrounding shockwaves will slice into the enemy.
Gatsuuga - Dual Piercing Fang
Character Use: Akamaru, Inuzuka Kiba
Rank: C
Description: Gatsuuga is a supreme Taijutsu technique of the Juujin Bunshin style of combat. After the familiar transforms into a copy of the clan member, both the familiar and ninja will begin a spinning attack. The preferred time to attack is when their opponent is showing an opening. Using this chance the fast rotating of the two attackers will cause a damaging impact on their opponent when they connect with their claws. While using this technique, both attackers are able to rotate and strike from multiple angles.
Tsuuga - Piercing Fang
Character Use: Inuzuka Kiba
Rank: D
Description: Tsuuga is a variation of Gatsuuga, a Taijutsu technique of the Juujin Bunshin style of combat. This version will just involve one individual clan member utilizing the spinning attack. The fast rotation will cause a damaging impact on their opponent or an nearby object when they connect with their claws. While using this technique, the ninja can rotate and strike from multiple angles.
Bakuretsu Koinu - Exploding Puppy
Character Use: Akamaru
Rank: E
Description: Bakuretsu Koinu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Inuzuka familiar Akamaru. Resembling himself, the Akamaru replacement is actually a booby trap. Once an enemy is lured in thinking Akamaru is injured, the replacement dog will explode and launch a hail of kunai in every direction. It is a basic replacement jutsu, that is used by ninja hounds or their masters for them.
Juujin Bunshin - Beast-Man Clone
Character Use: Akamaru, Inuzuka Kiba
Rank: D
Description: Juujin Bunshin is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Inuzuka clan. First the clan member and the familiar may ingest a soldier pill to help their strength and stamina. Then, acting in conjunction with the clan member, the canine familiar will transform themself into a copy of the clan member. While in this form they can accomplish many of the same techniques as the original.
Shikyaku no Jutsu - Four-Legged Technique
Character Use: Inuzuka Kiba
Rank: D
Description: Shikyaku no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Inuzuka clan. After forming the needed hand seals, chakra begins to emit from the body of the clan member and they take on a more canine-like appearance. These body changes give them increased speed and strength, by 20%.
Inuzuka Ryuu Chinjuu Konbi Henge: Soutou Rou - Inuzuka Style Rare Beast Transformation: Double-Headed Wolf
Character Use: Inuzuka Kiba, Akamaru
Rank: B
Description: Inuzuka Ryuu Chinjuu Konbi Henge: Soutou Rou is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by the Inuzuka Clan. This unique Konbi Henge is used by the clan member and their familiar, transforming them into a large mystical double headed-wolf. In this form the clan members can utilize the Garouga taijutsu technique.
Fang Rotating Fang
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The user rolls in a buzz-saw like shape, along with their ninken companion at high speeds to attack the enemy. Able to slice through solid rock with ease.
Name: Fang Wolf Fang
Rank: A
Type: taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The two then perform a much more powerful Fang Passing Fang attack. Like the lesser version, they spin rapidly to attack their target. This attack is powerful enough to cut a person in two, and even smash through a Rashōmon gate. Even if the attack misses, its speed is so great that the surrounding air can slice like a swords, able to cut through stone.
Name: Demon's Law Combination Transformation: Double-Headed Hell Hound
Rank: S
Type: nintaijutsu
Element: None
Description: This Brewser's and Hakai's ultimate jutsu and combination. It requires them both to do S rank jutsu to release this powerful Inuzka jutsu. This jutsu requires physical contact on from both ninja. Once contact is made they fuse into one being. Hakai also fuses his right arm with Samehada to add him to the fusion. Once completely they become roughtly four times the size of a giant summoning or 4 times Brewser's size. Also their front right paw is a Samehada fusion. As Hakai is able to fuse with Samehada at will, because Brewser and Hakai are perfectly balanced and one with each other Samehada doesn't refuse the fusion. As such their right paw and lower arm take on the properties of Samehada. In this form Hakai and Brewser's speed are fused and doubles; as well as their strength. Their sense are also high enhanced and they are able to see, smell and move twice as enhanced in the form. THey are also able to use Fang Wolf Fang, though its power, speed and kill potential quadruple. As they are able to fly through even steel, the wind created from this attack can easily cut through a person with out stopping. This is truly these two combination warriors greatest jutsu. This form lasts 5 posts and has a 4 post cool down.
Name: Rabid Hell's Fang over Fang
Rank: S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: None
Description: The most powerful version of the Inuzuka's amazing rotation techniques. This jutsu can only be used by someone who is master of all other Inuzuka clan skills and truly unleashed his canine side. This jutsu allow the user to spin with immense speed, unmatched by other inuzuka jutsu. The user rotates so fast that the air around them forms a tornado of slicing wind. As they move everything will begin to be draw in, including targets around them. The wind that forms the tornado is 1000s of slicing blades made on each rotation. The blades can cut through basic metals and rocks. Anything sucked in will swirl around in the hell storm of natural blades and be sliced into pieces. This storm never actually touches the user of this technique as he is in the center rotating and the storm in one meter in all directions. If hit head on by this a person will be smashed through like butter, while their bodies will be sucked up and sliced into bloody mush. This technique is twice times the size of fang over fang and the tornado that surrounds it is four times that sizes. Making this technique appear to be roughly three quarters the size of a giant summoning.
Name: Kuchiyose • Tsuiga no Jutsu - Tracking Fang Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Doton (Earth)
Description: This technique requires a summoning contract with dogs. The user will withdraw the tracking scroll and wipe the blood of the one he/she wants tracked on it. After forming the needed handseals, he/she will slam the scroll onto the ground. This will release his/her nin dogs into the earth to follow their excellent sense of smell to track the targets blood. This allows the user to track his/her short range target, even when he/she can not see them. After finding their target the dogs will emerge from the ground to bite and pin down their target.
hakai uses his Ninken to preform this technique.
Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]
Non-elemental jutsu
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Summoning Technique [Kuchiyose no Jutsu]
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon
animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally
signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon
different size and skill levels of creature.
Note:Must Have a signed contract with the animal you wont to summon
Shadow Clone jutsu
Rank: B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.
Name: Hari Jizou - Underworld Guardian Spikes
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique where the user encases themselves in a countless number of sharp needles, but in truth, the spikes are the user's hair. Chakra grants the strands of hair the hardness and shape of needles, endowed with a capacity to injure and kill on par with that of metallic weapons. In addition, if activated in response to an opponent's attack, it can also be used as a counter. The hair is made hard enough that it can withstand blows from certain types of weapons such as arrows, kunai or swords.
Name: Kekkai Houjin - Barrier Method Battle Array
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kekkai Houjin is a high-level Ninjutsu trap technique. An array of explosive markers are jointly placed around the boundary of an area. If any opponent walks through the boundary, the seals will activate and explode.
Name: Ranji Shigumi no Jutsu - Wild Lion's Mane Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the user will lengthen his or her hair and send it outwards to subdue his or her foe. If the user manages to trap them within his or her hair, he or she can make it harden into spikes to kill them.
Name: Shoushagan no Jutsu - Vanishing Facial Copy Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Shoushagan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used for spying. A dark technique, the jutsu involves the removal of the face of the person to be impersonated. By wearing their face and clothing, the ninja can impersonate the original without others being aware. They targets who face is stole must be killed.
Name: Gentoushin no Jutsu - Lit Apparition Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Gentoushin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the user and an individual(s) to gather at one location, even while members are in different parts of the world. By forming the needed handseal, an astral form of their being will appear at the desired location. This spirit can act in conjunction with other members to do combination jutsu. While in the spirit form, the member’s voice will sound deep and distorted.
Meisai Gakure no Jutsu [Camouflage Concealment Technique]
Rank: A
Description: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by Rock ninja. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja can grant themself near invisibility. So far only the Sharingan eye and its revelation abilities has been shown to pierce the veil and see the hidden ninja. It is unknown if the Byakugan can penetrate the jutsu and see the user's chakra circulatory system.
Weaponry Techniques
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Name: Kage Senbon no Jutsu - Shadow Senbon Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: This technique seems to be a variation of the Shadow Shuriken Technique, replacing shuriken with senbon. The user throws at the same time a senbon with a bell attached, and another one without it, so that the opponent will only react to the sound of the bell and won´t notice the other senbon. However, if the opponent recognises the trick behind it, this technique is easy to evade.
Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: D
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency.
Name: Gyorai Shin - Torpedo Needle
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: Removing nails from his or her pocket, the user will throw them into the air and then plant them tip first into the earth. Using his or her chakra the nails will travel into the ground. Then at his or her discretion, he or she can fire the nails from the ground through the feet of his or her target to nail them in place. He or she can then fire the remaining nails from the ground to cut his target to pieces.
Name: Hitei Mushou - Flying Nail Mist Pierce
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element:
Description: After forming the needed handseal, the user will emit a flying mist of small nails from his or her mouth. These small nails can travel towards his or her opponent at quite a distance.
Name: Kuchiyose • Tobidougu - Projectile Weapons
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: Should the user specialize in throwing projectile weapons; to enable her/him to carry more weapons, she/he will store them in a summoning scroll. When needed she/he can unwrap the scroll and summon whatever weapon she needs.
Name: Senbon Shower
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: After throwing a special umbrella that has been equipped with springs into the air, it will release a hailing "shower" of senbon. It cannot be dodged by moving away since the needles cover a wide area in all directions, controlled by chakra. Although the needles were said to be able to pierce a five millimeter thick steel sheet, they can still be blocked by a powerful enough shield. They can also be dipped in poison to increase lethality.
Name: Ishibari - Stone Needles
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: This technique makes use of the users chakra as a paralysing agent. The user throws kunai with strings attached at the opponent. Once the enemy is hit, chakra is run through the string to paralyse the opponent, which will serve to either incapacitate the enemy or allow the user or an ally to attack. However, against those who can absorb chakra, this technique could backfire as the target may simply steal chakra from the user, while exhibiting immunity to the paralysis.
Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer. Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles.
Name: Sakura Fubuki no Jutsu - Cherry Blossom Snow Storm Technnique
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The user will hurl kunai with pouches attached at her or his target. When they impact the pouches explode, releasing small explosive notes. Due to the large number of kunai thrown, a shower of notes will rain down on her/his target. She/he will activate all of the explosive notes at her/his target. Thus by igniting the falling smaller notes it will cause a gigantic explosion.
Name: Twin Rising Dragons
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: First, the user places two small scrolls in the floor. When activated, the two scrolls release smoke while also flying and spinning into the air in the shape of two dragons made of smoke. Tenten then jumps between the two scrolls, and starts to rapidly summon and throw all sort of weapons as a powerful barrage. If the initial attack were to fail, she can control the discarded weapons with wires attached to her/his fingertips for a surprise attack. However, because the weapons are thrown, they are easily countered by wind techniques.
Name: Raining Tags
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: Hakai summons a scroll from his wrist. Once opening it he spins it all around himself sending a hurricane of explosive tags around him. They are sent 5 meters in all directions and fire an amazing rate. They are release so fast they like blurs of white smoke. They can hit targets like slaps and even knock over a genin or non shinobi person. This is a powerful but basic technique.
Name: Sougu • Tensasai - Tool Manipulation • Heavenly Chain Disaster
Rank: C-A
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: A stronger version of the Twin Rising Dragons, the user tosses her/his large scroll into the air above her/his opponent and summons hundreds of different weapons from it, which then rain down, impaling the opponent and anything in their path. The weapons move so fast that they appear as white streaks.
Hakai uses this to send down stacks of explosive tags, equal to 20 tags.
Name: Homing Tag Technique (Hōmingutagu)
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: The user places their hand on the ground and releases a large number of exploding tags, which camouflage with the ground visually. Then stream to the target and wrap themselves around their target. Once in place, the tags explode, heavily damaging the target's. It can be used on humans or large summonings in its all based on how many summoning tags the user has. As well as the chakra expelled. This jutsu is done by covering the tags in chakra and release them at a target. They move at 6x the normal speed of a kunai.
Name: Bombing Senbon Shower
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: After throwing a special umbrella that has been equipped with springs into the air, it will release a hailing "shower" of senbon. It cannot be dodged by moving away since the needles cover a wide area in all directions, controlled by chakra. Although the needles were said to be able to pierce a five millimeter thick steel sheet, they can still be blocked by a powerful enough shield. They can also be dipped in poison to increase lethality. The umbrellas will speed at such a speed that they small tornado in the sky. Though until the parent jutsu this technique is set up to be far for lethal. As each needle has two mini explosive tags wrapped around it. They completely cover the senbon and normally aren't even visible as the needles move so fast. Allowing for user to end the move in a massive explosion.
Name: Ultra Senbon Shower
Rank: A
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: After throwing a special umbrella that has been equipped with springs into the air, it will release a hailing "shower" of senbon. It cannot be dodged by moving away since the needles cover a wide area in all directions, controlled by chakra. Although the needles were said to be able to pierce a five millimeter thick steel sheet, they can still be blocked by a powerful enough shield. They can also be dipped in poison to increase lethal capabilities. The umbrellas will speed at such a speed that they small tornado in the sky. However this more powerful version of this technique is not over. As under the normal umbrella is six identical seals that allow the user to summon six more umbrellas. Allowing for 7x the fire rate of this technique, making it a truly powerful weapon style.
Name: Death's Shower
Rank: S
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The most masterful technique Hakai has invented for his Umbrella weaponry style. After throwing a special umbrella that has been equipped with springs into the air, it will release a hailing "shower" of senbon. The umbrellas will speed at such a speed that they small tornado in the sky. It cannot be dodged by moving away since the needles cover a wide area in all directions, controlled by chakra. Although the needles were said to be able to pierce a five millimeter thick steel sheet, they can still be blocked by a powerful enough shield. They can also be dipped in poison to increase lethal capabilities. However this more powerful version of this technique is not over. As under the normal umbrella is six identical seals that allow the user to summon six more umbrellas. Allowing for 7x the fire rate of this technique, making it a truly powerful weapon style. But with this senbon shower technique each senbon has 4 mini explosive tags wrapped upon it. Allowing for a giant explosion and can be release literally in waves and waves of explosions. As the umbrellas will continue to fire for four turns. Once the technique is over only the ground where Hakai stands on is safe.
Name: Silent Homicide Killing technique
Rank: S
Type: Physical
Description: (Use Kenjutsu or weaponry) (Must be from the Mist Village)
No noise, until the sound of a body falling is how a master of the silent killing technique fights. This technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist are said to be masters of this technique, and were even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone. As a master of this technique you are able to move without any noise, or vibration on the ground. You rival a ghost in movement and when cover is provided, you are at your deadliest. You are a silent killer and a master at this killing art.
LIGHTING RELEASE ARMOR
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Name: Lightning Release Armor
Rank: S
Type: Physical/ninjutsu
Description: The user wraps their body in a layer of lightning chakra that, instead of being used offensively, is used to electrically stimulate the user's nervous system. The technique speeds up neural synapses to react faster to danger and to push physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing for tremendous raw speed. This armor, combined with taijutsu, allows A to utilize nintaijutsu. When using the armour at full power, it causes the tips of his hair to spike up[1] and his reflexes are said to be comparable to those of Konoha's Yellow Flash, making it difficult even for the Sharingan, to keep up with him. At the full level not even the strongest Sharingan can follow the user of this technique. The armour also increases the user's defences, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks.
W E A P O N
Hakai's Body
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Hakai using his medical knowledge has alter is body beyond that of normal inuzukas. His nails are as strong as titanium and able to slice through stone or standard ninja weapons, his teeth are equally strong. His senses are enhanced and he has super hearing and smell. Beyond that of any normal Inuzuka, when he enter sage mode they are even further enhanced.
Hakai's Black Umbrellas and Demon Umbrella
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 NORMAL UMBRELLAS Hakai uses umbrellas for one of his weaponry styles. It's a common weapon among ninja from Amegakure, Hakai learned it on his travels and mastered its arts. It can be equipped with many senbon that can be released with spring-loaded mechanisms, which are used to perform the Senbon Shower. Worn on the back, the ninja can quickly open the umbrella and hurl it into the air. Hakai summons these umbrellas from seals on his fore arms and only carries one with him on his waist, he calls it the Demon Umbrella. DEMON UMBRELLAHakai has a single umbrella on his waist, sometime he will store it inside of Samehada so to be used for a surprise attack. The only other weapon on his that he doesn't summon is Samehada. The umbrella is made of leather with titanium alloid plates. It is light and easily wielded. The umbrella that has had several custom modifications made to it. It can spew flames from the tip of it and release blocks of exploding tags, comprised of 25 tags in each bundle. They are launched from the sides, their are four on the umbrella. Additionally, the handle could be removed from the umbrella to reveal a hidden sword, the s Thize of an average katana. Hakai uses this umbrella to fly and release his strongest weaponry style technique. 
Random Equipment
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*10 Shuriken
*10 Kunai
*50 Explosive Tags
*Pre-drawn Diagram Scroll
*Map
*30 Smoke pellets
*2 water bottles
*4 weapons scrolls (filled with nothing but kunai w/ 3 explosive tags attached to each)
*4 Weapon Scrolls (filled with ninja weapons)
*Pouch of razor shap titanium nails*100*
*25 senbon with two ninja bells attached to each*
[SC] SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS.- Spoiler:
Name: Enhanced senses
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Description: The user has naturally high sense of smell, sight, hearing , touch and taste which oddly become more and more animal like. Able to see further, smell better etc then the average ninja.
Name: Elemental talents
Rank: C
Type: Chakra
Description: The user has natural talents with their dominate element, attacks with that element do 25% more damage the other jutsu of the same rank. (only applies to dominate element)
Name: Elemental excellence
Rank: B
Type: Chakra
Description: The user has natural talents with their elements, dominant element jutsus do 35% more damage and effectiveness the other jutsu of the same rank while recessive elements do 27% more damage effectiveness (does not stack with the effects of Elemental talents) . Further if someone wants an addition element to train can do so with 200 words less. ( only applies to elemental based jutsu) (requires Elemental talents )
Name: Almighty Elementalist
Rank: S
Type: Chakra
Requirements:: Dominate ninjutsu specialty
Description: The user has natural talents with their elements, attacks with that dominate element do 50% more damage and effectiveness the other jutsu of the same rank while recessive elements do 30% more damage effectiveness (does not stack with the effects of Elemental talents or Elemental excellence). Further if someone wants an addition element to train can do so with 200 words less. ( only applies to elemental based jutsu) (requires Elemental excellence)
Name: spiritual stamina
Rank: C
Type: Chakra
Requirements:: Cannot have chakra control
Description: The user has a strange amount of chakra to their naturally stamina, able to produced more then the average nin. Gains a total of 10 more B-rank chakra (cannot have medical as a specialty)
Name: Improved spiritual stamina
Rank: B
Type: chakra
Requirements:: Cannot have chakra control
Description: The user has an above average amount of chakra to their naturally stamina, able to produced more then the average nin, now with further training they have more though stamina building. Gainsa total of 15 more B-rank chakra( must have spiritual stamina) (stacks with spiritual stamina) (requires 3000 word training theard)
Name: Insane spiritual stamina
Rank: A
Type: Chakra
Requirements:: Cannot have chakra control
Description: The user has monstrous amounts of natural chakra now, so much so that sensory nin could mistake them as jinjuki for the levels of spiritual force they have. Gains a total of20 more B-rank chakra( must have improved spiritual stamina) (stacks with spiritual stamina and improved version)
[SC] TRAITS.- Spoiler:
Skilled Learner
3. The Formidable:You have practiced so freaking much its not funny. You have complete understanding of how to not overcompensate with how much your body does and when it gets sore, you're able to recover a bit faster. Your chakra is also very controlled as well and with that 50% word count decrease for training.
Tank
3. The Unmovable Force. Through sheer willpower and adaptation rate, you are able to take on a surprising amount of damage without you falling over. Your body alone is able to take on damage from some chakra enhanced strength but of course by now, you have an understanding that taking on more will definitely get you far worse than hurt. You understand pain entirely as if it was a friend of yours that you can rely on. You and pain have a contract and you are able to deliver a great amount of pain towards your enemies. You can take alot of damage. 30% Damage
Interrogator
2. Mind Torturer: Your torturing techniques are rather improved. You can make the mildest of of strong wills to break and you are able to get the information you need to get by. It's a large step ahead when you know how the mind words and your beginning to understand the psychology of interpersonal and intrapersonal attributes of the human mind. The torture skills are still increasing and you are beginning to try new tricks
Knowledgeable
2. Expert Knowledge: They have trained there mind to know more on the field of speciality and have begun to know more about the specialities of others. Experts have known well enough how to adjust accordingly to a situation and how to retaliate when it is necessary.
N O T . F O R G O T T E N
"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"
Birth Date: Winter
Home Village/Current: Akatsuki
Parents: Deceased
Siblings: MIA
Sensei / Role Model: Father: Deceased Previous Mizukage deceased
History: - Spoiler:
Hakai was born in the Village Hidden in the Mist. He was raised by his biological father Si-shen Onoki a Legendary Seven Swordsmen group known throughout the ninja world. His father loved Hakai and didn't want to tell Hakai the truth about his birth. So he told him his mother died in child birth but she loved him. Hakai was raised to learn how to fight with the sword and be a proper ninja. But Si-Shen knew that Hakai was something amazing. Hakai’s eyes first appeared when he was practicing with his father. They each held two iron swords in their training ground.
Si-shen attempting to teach his son a lesson on the importance of a good stance, purposely hit his son; cracking on his ribs. Hakai having Si-shen’s mighty temper got furious and lunged at his father. Only being 5 he still was able to swing with great rage and skill beyond his years.
His father seeing the rage and skill, need he had great potential to become the greatest ninja swordsmen of his time. But he also realized that Hakai was something else, that he held something special. But his father was constantly leaving the village to handle countless missions. So Hakai was trained by other Hozuki clan members. But Si-shen made sure Hakai would learn his custom clan techniques. Si-shen was happy to do it because he loved Hakai and wanted his legacy to live on. So he showed Hakai how to use his powers and ninjutsu. Hakai excelled and began to learn it on his own, slowly developing his powers. With the master of many techniques beyond his age, he graduated the ninja Academy at the amazing age of nine.
After the academy and became a official genin in the Village Hidden in the Mist. He went on a few minor missions, as well as continued to learn about his Kekkei Genkai. He then went to the chunin exam at 10 after another year of training. He went onto dominate the exams and bring great honor to the Mist village and his father. In the exams he saw what the ninja world was. There he killed for the first time. At the amazing age of 10 he was able to his clan’s hydration body technique . Around this time his father left for a mission somewhere near the village hidden in the sound. But he had all the text his father had written for him, so he began to practice all of his techniques.
Hakai than at the age of 14 was given the Rank of Jounin. He just continued to learn more and more jutsu. This father after a year returned from his mission. At that point he began to teach Hakai the silent homicide and the next level of his clan’s techniques. His father could not have asked for me, so he decided to tell his son all about where he came from. At 16 he was selected to join the seven shinobi swordsmen of the Mist and Si-shen was so proud. That is when he decided to tell Hakai the truth of his birth.
Hakai’s mother was a young woman his father met while on a mission to the Leaf village; she was a profession whore. Who slept with many powerful men. Though his father and mother did it out of the chemistry they had. As one of Si-shen’s codes are to never pay for sex. After that his father left and went back to the Mist as he was a bachelor and that would never change. Ten months later he was back in the Leaf area for a mission. So his father thinking that he could get at least one more night of a good time out of this harlot. She was at her home with 3 kids; a one year old, a 3 year old and a one month old. Hakai's father was shock to see the children. Then curiosity hitting him looked down at the baby. It had the women’s natural white hair. But the face, eyes and skin tone matched his.
At that point his father realized that the child was his. As only a member of the Hozuki clan could posses such features. But his father didn't say anything, because he didn't want to strike out with her. So that night a few hours after she had fallen asleep his father made his move. Using his master of the Silent Blade got dressed and made it to Hakai's crib. But as he lifted the baby an invisible string of bells rang out. The women launched into the room hold a kunai; looking ferocious at Hakai's father, Si-shen Hozuki. She order the him to drop the child but Si-shen refused, he would start a war between the two villages before he did that. Using his mastery of the sword, his father making two quick swipes to cut the kunai in half and put the blade to her throat. Explaining that if she ever came to look for this child he would kill her and all of her bastard children. Then left the Leaf with Hakai in his arms, still silently sleeping.
After that Hakai was shocked to find out the truth. But being raised by his father a professional bachelor it didn't surprise him. Then Hakai's father gave Hakai picture of his mother if he ever wanted it. But Hakai just tore it up and threw it out the window. He loved his dad and thats all he needed in his life. After that day Hakai knew he would be happy being a bachelor for the rest of his life. But Si-shen needed to leave his son again and Hakai needed to leave for his mission; so he gave his son another scroll for him. Inside of it was the final secret technique about their clan techniques. This would give Hakai the edge in many fights, as well as a body control technique. All seem to be perfect in his life. But on his 18th birthday two years after being proclaimed a legendary swordsmen, his father was killed on a Assassination Mission. It was a group of leaf ninja that killed him and for that Hakai would never forgive or show mercy to a Leaf ninja. That his when he first left the village hidden in the Mist and he swore he would never serve them again.
He left his home with his sword on his back and never looked back. He spent the next three years training and preparing for his goals to take place. As a top rouge ninja in the world he goes where he wants, does what he wants. After he fled his village he went to the near by Land of Waves. There he would storm the feudal lord palace. Many guards would charge at him but he quickly laid each of them to rest in pools of their own blood. Soon he would have the Feudal lord in front of him. He would have the plump man beg for his life before Hakai swung his sword. He would cleave off three fingers on his left hand. With a commanding roar he order the Feudal lord to give him the countries treasury.
The plump man was forced to oblige his demand. With in moments Hakai would have all the country's gold on their finest ship. Again returning to the Feudal Lord Hakai kicked the man to the ground. With another blow he cleaved off the rest of the mans remaining hand. Then looking down on the weeping man he said in a low voice. "You won't die so long as that wound is taken care of, tell the world the Hakai Hozuki the Demon of the Mist did this." With that he turned and left, in a few moments he would sail on their grand vessel. He would hed to the Sea Country to a place known as "Phantom Island." There he would make himself a new home and use the treasury of the Wave Country to make himself a palace, fit for a Demon.
Since his attack on the Land of Waves, the name Demon of the Mist has spread. His exact location is unknown. But he is wanted for countless murder in various countries. He has made a habit of entering small countries killing their guards and leaving without a trace. He is known by his calling card and his Silent Homicide technique. He wants more though and has plans to conquroer the ninja world. He lives up to the name of "Demon of the Mist."
© 2011 Ikeda Itō. All rights reserved, all pictures belong to their original owners. Quotes and Template out look curiosity of Ikeda Itō of : CRISIS 2.0 SO BEWARE OF THE WOLF SAGE!
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| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Wed Apr 18, 2012 11:23 am | |
| Omg... Weeks and now this... No I don't realize that lol.
The rules say kkgs clans are allow. Example head admins application had both LRA And. KKG. Her new app has a keg and a limited technique as well, so it doesn't make any sense that I can't use clan techniques which require no biological capabilities only to be taught them and sage mode. Certainly when my sage mode is practicallly based of inzuzka clan, as it requires an animal part to be achieved not just holding still. On iPad... So if there are typos... My bad | |
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| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Wed Apr 18, 2012 11:26 am | |
| Your specialisations dont add up to your clan
Specialisations = Ninjutsu Weaponry Medical Ninjutsu
Clan jutsu = Taijutsu and Nintaijutsu
You don't have the specs to use your clan techniques | |
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| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Wed Apr 18, 2012 12:27 pm | |
| fixed please look at app.. I posted in the banned/limited items to change from sage mode to LRA since its open now. If its approved it is only one change, so please continue to look over the application. | |
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| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Wed Apr 18, 2012 3:15 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Wed Apr 18, 2012 7:23 pm | |
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Hakai using his medical knowledge has alter is body beyond that of normal inuzukas. His nails are as strong as titanium and able to slice through stone or standard ninja weapons, his teeth are equally strong. His senses are enhanced and he has super hearing and smell. Beyond that of any normal Inuzuka, when he enter sage mode they are even further enhanced.
something like this would require medical
Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer. Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles.
requires fuin
Name: Silent Homicide Killing technique
Rank: S
Type: Physical
Description: (Use Kenjutsu or weaponry) (Must be from the Mist Village)
No noise, until the sound of a body falling is how a master of the silent killing technique fights. This technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist are said to be masters of this technique, and were even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone. As a master of this technique you are able to move without any noise, or vibration on the ground. You rival a ghost in movement and when cover is provided, you are at your deadliest. You are a silent killer and a master at this killing art.
This is not a jutsu but used here as a Sc which requires stages on top of that only kenjutsu users are allowed this, Aswell as this due to it being s-rank and an assasination technique it will require the three assassination techs we have here on the site
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| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Wed Apr 18, 2012 7:29 pm | |
| Will change everything except...
Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer. Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles.
Its a weaponry technique, the sealing of weapons is weaponry. Fuin jutsu is in fact sealing technqiues, but this is not a specialty jutsu. If fall under just weaponry, it is basically an advanced form of the genin techniques seen with tenten. Also this technique isn't actually the seal, it is just using presealed items. Thus these seal could easy be gained in the oinja world as simple as kunai or a scroll of kunai. Which is why it fall under weaponry and I employ you to reconsider. | |
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| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Thu Apr 19, 2012 9:01 am | |
| I'm sorry for the wait, Hakai. I've brought your app to the the forefront. Now, onto some admin-like things :3
Name: Kuchiyose • Raikou Kenka - Summoning • Lightning Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Weaponry
Element: N/A
Description: The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summonable ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer. Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles.
Myself, along with some other people have discussed this jutsu. The fact that you state "Hakai uses 100s of seals all over his body to summon countless ninja projectiles," makes it too OP. Our take on it is, it isn't fair for someone with a specialization in Fuinjutsu when this jutsu can only take place through SUMMONING, which is not the main point of weaponry. In addition, this jutsu is seen as being sealed on objects, such as cloth and what not. But, making an exception, you, being a person, are an object as well. Here's my advice: You should remove the 100 seals portion and state how many tools and which tools are sealed within the seals, within reason.
Another thing that was pointed out is the fact that you have Akatsuki and a Samehada. You cannot have both, unfortunately. If you choose the akatsuki, you will have to change the portion of your app that states, "Hakai has a single umbrella on his waist, sometime he will store it inside of Samehada so to be used for a surprise attack. The only other weapon on his that he doesn't summon is Samehada." And if you want the Samehada, you must originate from Kiri.
Also, I've counted that you have exceeded the number of jutsus allowed for your rank. S-ranked shinobi are granted 27 A and lower jutsus and 3 S rank jutsus respectively.
Change those things, in addition to the things you agreed to changing in Jay's post above and this app will be looked at again.
Sorry for such the long wait! v.v | |
| | | | Hakai
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Character Rep : 64
Join date : 2011-10-06
| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Thu Apr 19, 2012 1:08 pm | |
| Oh lol XD Samehada isn't suppose to be on this app. The problem I have is that 90% of all my character used Samehada, so it is inside countless of my jutsu and descriptions. Mainly because I am so use to having a character that uses it. But on this site I wasn't intended to use Samehada. Also the seals all over his body is from a different app, where I made a S rank pure weaponry user. Basically a grown up S rank version of what Tenten would be if she became a bad ass. So I will remove that stuff its just from other apps. Sorry. | |
| | | | Reni
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Join date : 2011-10-16
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: HaKai Inuzuka - Wolf Sage Thu Apr 19, 2012 1:37 pm | |
| That's no problem ^-^ Bump it when you're finished and I'll look at it again. | |
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