Kuroski Clan

Name: Kuroski

Location: Sukaigakure

Type: What is the main 'Jutsu' of the clan. And it's sub-main.
* Taijutsu-sub-main
* Ninjutsu-main


Bloodline: The Kuroski clan is known for there ability as sensory and as such all member have a natural talent toward this trait. They have a unique ability that allows them to sense the surrounding chakra flows and new chakra flows that intrude on the natural chakra's of nature. By being able to sense one natural chakra flow they can to some degree piece together if the chakra is friendly, aggressive or indifferent allowing them to then guess at what the person or animals intentions are. This allows them to almost to certainty detect any intruder, traveler, or friend entering the area. Yet is far from perfect and they still need to train in this field if they wish to become masters in it. They just have a head start over the regular person in it. The Kuroski clan has also invented many jutsu to use to heighten and help them in their roles as sensory types adapting many different jutsu to benefiting their special sensory. The Kuroski family also have a natural affinity to water and wind style becoming competent in both of them.

Current Members: not open

Clan Jutsu[s]:
Jutsu Name: Air perception
Rank: C-A
Element: wind
Ranges: Short to Mid
Type: ninjutsu
Description: After performing the needed hand signs the user releases some of their chakra into the surrounding air allowing them to sense the natural chakra flow of the surronding area. By doing this they are able to notice when a diffrent chakra source enters the area they are focusing on. While aniimals may change the balance that is being observed they usually don't put off a large enought chakra source for the Kuroski's to pay them much notice unless they are a summoning. The area of effect depends on how much chakra the user releases and its also a substaial drain on their chakra making it not ideal for continual use.
20 points-the user is able to sense within the surrounding 10 meters
40 points- the user is able to sense within the surrounding 20 meters
50 points- the user is able to sense within the surrounding 30 meters

Jutsu Name: Ripple effect
Rank: C-A
Element: water
Ranges: Short to Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Like the Air perception technique this allows the user to sense and distrubences in the immedate area only this time its through water instead of air. As withe the Air perception technique the user is able to seperate animals from people and summonings by the amount of chakra they sense in the change. The draw backs are the same as the Air preception technique in that the range of area is determined by the amount of chakra and its not ideal for long uses.
20 points-the user is able to sense within the surrounding 10 meters
40 points- the user is able to sense within the surrounding 20 meters
50 points- the user is able to sense within the surrounding 30 meters

Jutsu Name: Roaring flood
Rank: C
Element: water
Ranges: Short Range
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After perfoming the needed hand signs the user is able to spew a large amount of water from their mouth that floods the surronding 20 feet in 2 foot deep water. Mainly used to summon water when their is none so they can use other jutsu. (40 points per turn)

Jutsu Name: Banshee Scream
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Ranges: Mid to Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After performing hand signs the user channels wind chakra into their lungs as they take a deep breath. Then they exhale it as they scream in the direction of their target unleashing a condensed shot of wind chakra that when it comes in contact with something it release the condensed waves of wind chakra in a blast radius of 4 meters slicing whatever is in that area. This technique requires a decent amount of chakra(40 points) to begin with and can often leave its users momentarily winded and out of breath.

Jutsu Name: Air Cutter
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Ranges: Short Range
Type: taijutsu
Description:By chanleing wind chakra into the arms the user is able to turn their ordinary punches into razor sharp attacks. The draw back is to maintain during a fight requires a large amount of chakra( 20 points per turn) control and stanima along with the honed razor edge along the users arm that extend out away from the body for 3 inchs can be just as deadly to them as it is to their opponents if they aren't careful in the way they attack.

Jutsu Name: Gust
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Ranges: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: it allows the user to sense and dectect things in a large area around them. Instead of rain though like Pain's jutsu the user summons a wind storm and can sense anything the wind touches as it blows. Thaanks to the Kuroski's abillity to recognize diffrent flows of chakra they can distinguish between plant, animal, and human chakra. The drawbacks are that it takes (10 points of chakra per turn) and they have to remain stationary during the jutsu.

Jutsu Name: Elemental armor
Rank: B
Element: Wind or water
Ranges: Short Range
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:After performing the hand signs the user forms a lose set of armor either made from water or wind whichever they decide. Each have their benifts as the water armor is more adsorbent being able to reduce physical attack damage and block B rank fire jutsu. The wind can repel B rank lightning jutsu and while not as protective as the water form will cut anything that comes in contact with it. Chakra cost of 40 points

Jutsu Name: Wind release
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Ranges: Short, Mid, Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The ultimate jutsu of the Kuroski clan. The user unleashes all his chakra in one blast that radiates outwards from them cutting anything in the surrounding 30 feet. The chakra required for it is 120 points taking a heavy toll on those that use it.

Clan History: The kuroski clan started off humbly as a low clan of mercenaries who knew their native lands well. Because of this many powerful countries often contracted them out to be used as scouts and guides for their own armies. It was in this role that their skills as sensory types became more and more important as they developed and honed their skills. It would take a generation before they would be recognized by the powerful nations in the world, but once they were they were offered a permanent spot in the Sukaigakure by its kage that they eagerly accepted.

Now that they have a place among a village they quickly cut back on the mercenary work and started useing their skills for the village only. It was during this time that many strong members rose to lead the family adding new jutsu and skills to the family's resume. The clan is well respected by the kage and village that they serve along with other villages too. For they become the main safeguard for the village to warn of any possible ninja comeing to stir up trouble. The Land of Sky is hard to travel through without being seen because of the skills they posses.

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Jutsu Name: Wind release
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Ranges: Short, Mid, Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The ultimate jutsu of the Kuroski clan. The user unleashes all his chakra in one blast that spreds outwards from them cutting anything caught in its range. The range of the technique varies depending on how much chakra a user has and also after use the user has exhausted any chakra they may have and will be close to if not passed out from exhaustion.


we have a chakra system on this site and each rank of jutsu requires a specific amount of chakra per use so this jutsu's description needs changing and what direction can this jutsu go in.


Jutsu Name: Elemental armor
Rank: B
Element: Wind or water
Ranges: Short Range
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:After performing the hand signs the user forms a lose set of armor either made from water or wind whichever they decide. Each have their benifts as the water armor is more adsorbent being able to reduce physical attack damage and fire jutsu. The wind can repel lightning style and while not as protective as the water form will cut anything that comes in contact with it.


for the water armour it can only block up to B rank fire jutsu

the wind one it can only block b rank lighting as well


Jutsu Name: Spring Rain
Rank: A
Element: Water
Ranges: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:After performing hand signs the user creates a rain storm in the surrounding area. As the rain falls the user is able to sense anything it touches. The draw back is this jutsu takes large amounts of chakra often leaving the user drained after it. Also with so much sensory information coming to the user it requires them to stay stationary while useing it so they can proccess the information making it imposiple to use in battle.

same as this one we have a chakra system and would require a usage per turn to keep it up. This jutsu is also like the canon jutsu that was used by pain to watch amegakure.

The link below this writing is the link to the canon technique.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rain_Tiger_at_Will_Technique


Jutsu Name: Gust
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Ranges: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:Like the Spring Rain technique it allows the user to sense and dectect things in a large area around them. Instead of rain though the user summons a wind storm and can sense anything the wind touches as it blows. The drawbacks are similar in that it take a large toll on the casters chakra reserves and they have to remain stationary during the jutsu.

like the one above it needs a chakra cost per turn it is used for. I think D rank chakra cost for both is fine.

Jutsu Name: Air Cutter
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Ranges: Short Range
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:By chanleing wind chakra into the arms the user is able to turn their ordinary punches into razor sharp attacks. The draw back is to maintain during a fight requires a large amount of chakra control and stanima along with the honed razor edge along the users arm can be just as deadly to them as it is to their opponents if they aren't careful in the way they attack.

Taijutsu

How far are the razor sharp blades

Jutsu Name: Water creation
Rank: A
Element: water
Ranges: Short Range
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After performing hand signs the user is able to mold near by water into a tool or weapon they need. While the items are no where near as effective as the real things they don't feel like water either and are more then capeable of injuring a target.

water is not able to really beformed into weapons and tools are it is liquid it will not be able to cut or piece anyway water is mainly used as presure damage nothing more.

And since it is a luquid stuff will pass through it so this jutsu is really pointless


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Name: Kuroski

Location: Sukaigakure

Type: What is the main 'Jutsu' of the clan. And it's sub-main.
* Taijutsu-sub-main
* Ninjutsu-main


Bloodline: The Kuroski clan is known for there ability as sensory and as such all member have a natural talent toward this trait. Yet is far from perfect and they still need to train in this field if they wish to become masters in it. They just have a head start over the regular person in it. The Kuroski clan has also invented many jutsu to use to heighten and help them in their roles as sensory types.

Current Members: not open

Clan Jutsu[s]:
Jutsu Name: Air perception
Rank: C
Element: wind
Ranges: Short to Mid
Type: ninjutsu
Description: After performing the needed hand signs the user releases some of their chakra into the surrounding air allowing them to sense the slightest disturbance through it. The area of effect depends on how much chakra the user releases and its also a substaial drain on their chakra making it not ideal for continual use.

Jutsu Name: Ripple effect
Rank: C
Element: water
Ranges: Short to Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Like the Air perception technique this allows the user to sense and distrubences in the immedate area only this time its through water instead of air. The draw backs are the same as the Air preception technique in that the range of area is determined by the amount of chakra and its not ideal for long uses.

Jutsu Name: Roaring flood
Rank: D
Element: water
Ranges: Short Range
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After perfoming the needed hand signs the user is able to spew a large amount of water from their mouth that floods the immedate area in water. Mainly used to summon water when their is none so they can use other jutsu.

Jutsu Name: Banshee Scream
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Ranges: Mid to Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After performing hand signs the user channels wind chakra into their lungs as they take a deep breath. Then they exhale it as they scream in the direction of their target unleashing a condensed shot of wind chakra that will explode with whatever it comes in contact with. This technique requires a decent amount of chakra to begin with and can often leave its users momentarily winded and out of breath.

explode is not really the word you should use as wind does not explode mainly just presure and high winds

also what is the "explosion size" blast radius on impact

Jutsu Name: Roaring flood
Rank: D
Element: water
Ranges: Short Range
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After perfoming the needed hand signs the user is able to spew a large amount of water from their mouth that floods the immedate area in water. Mainly used to summon water when their is none so they can use other jutsu.

Right with this it should be C rank and how deep is the water and how many metres does it cover.


Jutsu Name: Air perception
Rank: C
Element: wind
Ranges: Short to Mid
Type: ninjutsu
Description: After performing the needed hand signs the user releases some of their chakra into the surrounding air allowing them to sense the slightest disturbance through it. The area of effect depends on how much chakra the user releases and its also a substaial drain on their chakra making it not ideal for continual use.

there is a charka system on the site like I have mentioned many times already so you need to include the chakra costs for this jutsu as you said the area effect depends on how much chakra is used tell me how much chakra does what and you do know that you would be able to sence everything right like when atree branch moves so how would you know it is the enemy or whatever can you tell what is what this jutsu need greater detail to it and may required to be higher rank depending on your edit.

Jutsu Name: Ripple effect
Rank: C
Element: water
Ranges: Short to Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Like the Air perception technique this allows the user to sense and distrubences in the immedate area only this time its through water instead of air. The draw backs are the same as the Air preception technique in that the range of area is determined by the amount of chakra and its not ideal for long uses

same as the above one you have to consider chakra costs and other stuff.


Bloodline: The Kuroski clan is known for there ability as sensory and as such all member have a natural talent toward this trait. Yet is far from perfect and they still need to train in this field if they wish to become masters in it. They just have a head start over the regular person in it. The Kuroski clan has also invented many jutsu to use to heighten and help them in their roles as sensory types.

tell me more of the ability of the sensory because you have just put it give you the bloodline of sensory but any ninja could be a sensory ninja and is not really special to be a bloodline so tell me more of what it can and what makes this special from toher sensory type ninja.

Please make the edits and another member of staff will check it again. Please bump after edits are made and only do it once.

Thank you Kaira

ok i will get to editing but you mentioned a chakra cost and i cant find any reference to it on the site so if you could post the link to the proper reference ill be more then happy to make the called for changes. thanks.

Click Here: Chakra and Stamina costs are at the bottom

k edited thanks for the help aiden

Jutsu Name: Wind release
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Ranges: Short, Mid, Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The ultimate jutsu of the Kuroski clan. The user unleashes all his chakra in one blast that radiates outwards from them cutting anything in the surrounding 40 feet. The chakra required for it is 120 points taking a heavy toll on those that use it.

30 feet max

Jutsu Name: Spring Rain
Rank: A
Element: Water
Ranges: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:After performing hand signs the user creates a rain storm in the surrounding area. As the rain falls the user is able to sense anything it touches. The draw back is this jutsu takes large amounts of chakra often leaving the user drained after it. Also with so much sensory information coming to the user it requires them to stay stationary while useing it so they can proccess the information making it imposiple to use in battle.

The link below this writing is the link to the canon technique.

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Rain_Tiger_at_Will_Technique

remove this one too much like the canon version

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