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All have been laid to rest, all expect memories. Throughout the years, shinobi - men and women - have learned how to preserve the memories of thousand of great shinobi that have lived, and then have passed. Though, they never managed to gain the memories of Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, and Uchiha Sasuke. These three ninjas are wildly known as the Three Heroes of the world. They are the mirror images of their legendary Sannin teachers, and touched everyone's life in some sort of way. Their memory though has been scattered across the world, and the pieces of their chakra find themselves locked away in certain men and women, wildly known as the Kages of today. They are the shadows and guardians of today's new era, and they seem to wait for something to happen. They await for Madara Uchiha to return, the Fourth Shinobi War had been created by none ever than Obito Uchiha, Kakashi's old friend whom he thought had died. In this war, numerous men and women died trying to protect all that they thought was right and true, in the end - Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke had perished by giving up their lives to kill Madara and Obito Uchiha. Their chakra awoken a sleeping God, whom took the combined power of the ten bijuu, kurama and the eight tailed bijuu's life source and basically recreated life anew. These memories however, are gone, and cannot be recreated or found in any memory book, or even in text. This story is being told through the combined chakra fragments of the Legendary Heroes that each Kage takes upon their death and inserts into a crystal fragment. However, life as everyone now knows, is finally changing. Kazengakure and Hyozangakure had finally came to an agreement of forming a grand alliance between their villages, rumored that they were related by distant cousins, this alliance would be greater than any had ever seen. The day of the treaty being signed, and thus the festival on the island of Heiwa, a new danger had awaken that day. The Sage of Six Paths was unable to keep a dark entity in slumber from the grave and beyond; a new five tailed bijuu - the Hydra - had awoken. In a fit of rage and unknown, the Hydra destroyed half of the festival grounds, killing more than five thousand civilians and shinobi alike. The Bijuu set it's eyes on the building where the witnessing six kages were located, and destroyed the entire building. Three months had passed, and Sannins of each village filled the spots of the Kages, as many hoped that one day there would be news that someone had survived the attack. Only the Hyozangakure's kage had returned, apparently unaware of what happened. Because of this, many of the villages have returned hostile towards each other, many blaming Hyozengakure for the attack that killed each of the Kage's. Slowly, men and women of each village are elected to fill the Kage spots of each of the village, alliances are being forged and mended. But can anyone form a great alliance to take down Hydria, and once again, scatter all of the tailed beasts across the world?

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"My grandfather told me of a very special person."


    Name: Acheron
    Middle: Snow
    Surname:Parthenopaeus
    Age: 21
    Gender: Male
    Sexual Orientation: Straight

    Overall Appearance: Acheron Parthenopaeus is a man that stands at a height of about five foot ten inches. His purple hair it's self is about three feet long proving to stop around his lower back area as his legs are a bit longer than his torso proving his forte to be more so speed than the strength that comes with top heaviness. To hold the hair back and keep it from interfering from hindering his vision, Ash wears a white head band in the place of his normal leafhead band. His normal one is worn around his right arm under the purple coat that he wears at all times. Said coat is adorned with white diamonds along it placed in a formation that if seen from a great distance would be noted to those who knew his clan and their symbol to be the very same one just in a very different color.

    Ash's eyes are a light purple that seem to glisten a bright silver when shone in the light of the sun and a pale white in the light of the moon. The coat he wears seems to be close to skin tight on his arms and torso sporting the amount of toned muscle that he has although his body is lean, not having much bulk for whatever reason. Acheron wears a black necklace made of what appears to be string, but is actually a black wire that he uses to house several charms that was given to him by his father. Each charm is said to be from one of the medical ninja of the senju clan's past and are there not only for protection, but to channel the skills of those that came before the wearer. The last of his ensamble are two twin kata that are also heirlooms
    Overall Persona: Acheron, while only seventeen, has several ways about him that most adults or rather older people wouldn't have yet developed. He has an air about him that seems to be mostly serious while that isn't very true. His serious nature lies mostly dormant in most situations only coming out during a fight, mission, or any other situation that requires he drop the, very fake, friendly act and get down to immediate business. In times of peril or in any situation where most would show fear, anger, hesitation, or sadness Acheron can and most likely will keep a very cool head to fully asses and understand what is going on. His father's first lesson of life to him was that anyone ninja or regular person that could not keep their head on their shoulders was useless to everyone around them and would only get more people than themselves hurt or killed.

    This was a harsh but necesary lesson for young Acheron to learn and his love for helping others also was spurred from it. Those few words from his father shaped the entirety of the male's personality and his choice in career, ie becoming a ninja and in turn one that specializes in medicine and the medical arts. When around those he considers friends Acheron seems to be more easy going than not proving that his stoic face during missions can be morphed into that of a teenager who doesn't seem to have the weight of his family on his shoulders. As far as relationships go the young shinobi has never had a single girlfriend or kiss for that matter as he feared that such actions would deter him from his goals and that was unacceptable. All in all the young man is more of a normality than anyone could realize.

    The truth to it all was that Acheron was a down to earth kinda guy with an arrogant air that fitted most under the umbrella of Uchiha, but he was not one to be swept under the rug and laid with the rest of the people in a group. As a youth he realized that he was handsome and that didn't stop him from not taking it all to the head and becoming a monsterous asshole that most expected him to be. He was infact the exact opposite and hated fighting unless there was a real reason before him, but he couldn't help but thing as he fluttered through the pages of the book that it had some truth behind it. He was a medical pro who made choices that most wouldn't but again that was a hinderance that was taken too far by the imaginative butler. He always was one to blow things out of proporting, but that wasn't something that the young man lingered on. Like most things in this world he let it be if it wasn't of immediate importance to his mission or to him and the book of a butler that was over exaggerated wasn't.
    Fears: Lightning being hurt, loss of his memories
    Likes: Reading, Snow, Lightning, Learning
    Dislikes: Training, Fighting, War
    Catch Phrase: The truth of reality is that it is only perception.





I.D. U N K N O W N

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"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."


    Village: Ex Kirigakure
    Rank: Akatsuki
    Bloodline: Sharingan
    Elements: Lightning
    Specialization: Medical Ninjutsu Fuuinjutsu





B L O O D . T Y P E

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"He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."


    Name: Acheron
    Clan Type: Shinobi
    Kekkei Genkai:Sharingan Mangekyou Sharingan
    Sharingan is the blood inheritance limit of the Uchiha Clan. The Mangekyou Sharingan is a legendary doujutsu ability which has only emerged in a few clan members in its history. There is still mystery surrounding the eye and the Uchiha clan itself. Each user develops their own unique looking Mangekyou. The requirements for gaining the Mangekyou are very controversial in nature. After Uchiha Itachi murdered his best friend Shisui he gained Mangekyou. He told his younger brother Sasuke that to gain the Mangekyou, he too would have to kill his closest friend. Itachi told Sasuke that a scroll in their clan shrine revealed the true original purpose of the clan doujutsu. This scroll and Itachi himself revealed that the former leader of their clan, Uchiha Madara and his younger brother Izuna were the first to obtain Mangekyou. Madara himself did this by killing his friend, it's assumed Izuna also killed a close comrade.
    The Uchiha are said to be descendants of the Hyuuga, with the Byakugan changing into the Sharingan over time. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and almost instantly memorize the movements required to be able to complete it, including the needed chakra moldings and seals used. However the clan member cannot copy techniques that are unique to another bloodline and the clan member must have a body capable of meeting the chakra and physical requirements to do the jutsu. This rarely stops the clan member though, as such stressful situations often push their limits farther and allow them to harness their full potential.
    Clan Element: Fire Blaze
    Clan History: The Uchiha Clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the Byakugan bloodline and further back to be the heirs of the Rikudou Sennin's eldest son, who is said to have received his father's "eyes" and with it his powerful chakra and spiritual energy. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps, which would incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

    Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye such Amaterasu, Kamui, Susanoo and Tsukuyomi. The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member.





P A S S E D & L E A R N E D

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"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

Elemental Jutsu[s]


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    Jutsu Name:
    Japanese styled.
    Rank: E - S.
    Element: What Element?
    Range:
    Type: What type is it?
    Description: Explain how it works.

Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]


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•Jutsu Name: Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Nin
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

Jutsu Name: Hiding with Camouflage
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Type: Nin/Supp
Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. However, the usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills.

Name: Mystic Palm Technique
Rank:A
Element: Medical
Type: Supp
Description: This medical ninjutsu allows the user to speed up the body's natural healing process by sending chakra from their hands into a wound or afflicted body part. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield. It can be used to treat both external and internal injuries. It is vital to match the amount of chakra used to the severity of the affliction or injury. This requires a great amount of chakra control. Because of this, only a few highly skilled medical-nin are able to use this technique. In Part II, Kabuto demonstrated the ability to use it a short distance away from the target instead of close contact, much like Acheron can. By sending an excess amount of chakra into the patient's body, the user can overload the patient's normal circulation, trapping them in a comatose state. Although this is usually undesirable, Kabuto Yakushi once effectively used this side effect to get Kiba Inuzuka out of his way.

Jutsu Name: Chakra Scapel
Rank: B
Element: Medical
Type: Supp/Attack
Description: This medical technique forms one's chakra into a small, sharp blade. This can then be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the chakra scalpel can actually make cuts inside the body without actually creating an open wound, limiting the risks of an infection. The chakra scalpel can also be used offensively, although it requires great precision to be effective. Because of this requirement, using the chakra scalpel offensively is highly unusual but it can still effectively cut muscle tissues and tendons, rendering the target immobile. In turn Acheron can easily cut through wood and flesh with this technique.


Name: Fire Sealing
Rank: B
Description: This technique allows the user to seal fire into a scroll. The user writes the seal on a scroll and then performs the required hand seals. This causes a vapour to appear from the scroll, enveloping the fire and sealing it on the scroll as the kanji for seal (封). Jiraiya used this technique to seal away the black fire from Itachi Uchiha's Amaterasu technique.

Name: Five Elements Sealing
Rank: A
Description: This jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become unconscious and unable to fight for a short time. Orochimaru performed this jutsu to tamper with the seal on the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox. The original seal allowed the Nine-Tails' chakra to seep out into Naruto Uzumaki, but the additional seal disturbs this, preventing Naruto from using the Nine-Tails' chakra or even controlling his own chakra properly. This is because an odd-numbered seal creates an imbalance when placed on top of an even-numbered seal. When Orochimaru later notices that the seal has been removed, he remarks that there are very few ninja capable of doing so.

Name: Five Elements Unseal
Rank: A
Description: When Jiraiya performs this technique on Naruto, the "Five Elements" referred to in the name are the Chinese Five Elements, the Five Movements (五行, Japanese: Gogyō, Chinese: Wǔxíng):
Metal (金, Chinese: jīn),
Wood (木, Chinese: mù),
Water (水, Chinese: shuǐ),
Fire (火, Chinese: huǒ),
and Earth (土, Chinese: tǔ),
This suggests the elements are merely symbolic. However, when Kazuma performs this technique on Sora, the five elements are shown as the five chakra elements used in most other techniques, the Five Greats (五大, Godai):
Earth (土, tsuchi),
Water (水, mizu),
Fire (火, hi),
Wind (風, kaze),
and Lightning (雷, kaminari).

Jutsu Name: All Mighty Seal
Rank:S
Element:
Range: Touch-Anywhere
Type:Fuuinjutsu
Description:
The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person's body. This seal binds with the persons chakra with his in a manner that allows him to control what goes in and out of their chakra stream. Outside chakras or foreign seals would be dispersed without any harm coming to the bearer of the seal. It works as a gate guard that blocks foreign entities but at the same time alerts Acheron when said entities attempt to enter that person's chakra stream. It doesn't prohibit healing and a powerful enough chakra such as a bijuu could break it partially requiring an immediate fixing within a three day span or the seal will be completely broke. In conjunction with five elements seal it acts as a near perfect barrier for keeping things in or out and can only be undone by the person who put it there. Those taught to do so personally by Acheron can use it, but only Acheron can double lock the seals in turn doubling it's power. With enough time and effort they can be triple and even further locked although such takes an amazing amount of time to do with the precision it would take meaning that levels one and two are the only ones that can be done instantly.

Jutsu Name: Summoning Style Contract Disposal
Rank:B
Element:
Range: Touch
Type:Fuuinjutsu
Description:
The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person or being's body. It pulls free any ties to that person or being to a summoning contract and dispurses marking that the contract has been broken for good.

Jutsu Name: Evolutionary Seal
Rank:B
Element:
Range: Touch-Anywhere
Type:Fuuinjutsu
Description:
The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person or being. The seal immediately sips into their chakra stream and body binding them to Acheron as a summoning that he can bring to him by one of his many personal summoning methods. This seal slightly differs from the All Mighty Seal, but if Acheron so choses it can be tied into it.

Jutsu Name: Seal Summoning Jutsul
Rank:D-S
Element:
Range: Touch-Anywhere
Type:Fuuinjutsu
Description:
The user of this seal, which is actually a summoning jutsu that he makes by bringing two parts of his body together, can bring one of his summons to his aid. Clapping his hands and placing them down, simply clapping them, snapping his fingers, or the average summoning jutsu hand seals all work to get one of his summons be it contract or through the evolutionary seal to his aid. [/spoiler]

    Jutsu Name: Japanese styled.
    Rank: E - S.
    Element: What Element?
    Range:
    Type: What type is it?
    Description:
    Explain how it works.






W E A P O N



    Name: Assorbire e Rilasciare

    Rank: S
    Fused Element: Lightning
    Description: Twin Katana that are both equal in length and durability, strong enough to be considered S ranked but meant to be more ceremonial. They are both four feet in length with eight inch hilts and are able to conduct chakra easily. Their designs match his coat perfectly and were bestowed upon him by his butler from his family or atleast they were taken from him after his untimely doom. The blade is mate of tempered black chakra steel and can cut through most objects with extreme ease.
    Origin: A family heirloom that Acheron took from his butler after he did some bitchnigga shit and hid it from him.



[SC] SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS.

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[SC] TRAITS.

Traits are bonuses much like special characteristics, but they don't always enhance your combat capabilities. Instead they passively enhance your character in all aspects, dependent on the traits you have chosen. Keep in mind you will only be allowed a limited number of traits, and they are unchangeable once put on your application, so choose them with care.

You'll find the traits here. [here]



[spoiler]1. The Practicioner: a student who has determination. You are starting into the world of the shinobi and seeing that the one way to get stronger is by practice, you put that into your mental philosophy and decide that it's time for you start up on some things. Your practices are a bit infrequent, your muscles need time to rest because you're just learning

2. The Undeterred: You have practiced so much you have developed a routine. This routine allows you to adapt with your muscles, so you're less fatigue than with most. Your chakra is starting to become balance and because of that, you have 25% less word req when training jutsu

3. The Formidable:You have practiced so freaking much its not funny. You have complete understanding of how to not overcompensate with how much your body does and when it gets sore, you're able to recover a bit faster. Your chakra is also very controlled as well and with that 50% word count decrease for training.

-Tank
1. The Wall. Never really the one who will dodge away from an attack because really dodging isn't really a think you specifically like to do. Starting out at the basic wall, you have some vitality on you so that you dont' have faint away when you are getting punch and kicked. You can't take on too much damage. you're still human. You're still learning to take more damage and thus gain a 10% Damage reduction.
2. The Juggernaut. (Insert Joke Here). Your vitality have greatly improved Not bad, you can take much more damage. It takes a good amount of time for you to be taken down without you feeling the innate pain that will reach to your nerves and to your body itself. Because you understand pain, you're able to determine what will cause your opponent to fall. You have some knowledge on what force that'll send a person hurling over 20% Damage reduction.

3. The Unmovable Force. Through sheer willpower and adaptation rate, you are able to take on a surprising amount of damage without you falling over. Your body alone is able to take on damage from some chakra enhanced strength but of course by now, you have an understanding that taking on more will definitely get you far worse than hurt. You understand pain entirely as if it was a friend of yours that you can rely on. You and pain have a contract and you are able to deliver a great amount of pain towards your enemies. You can take alot of damage. 30% Damage

Liar
1. Schoolyard Liar: You could probably get away from stealing from a candy store and tell that you weren't there but the probability of that happen is about fourty percent. You're beginning to understand the psychology of people, you're just starting to make up stories whether imaginative or not, you're only just learning the basics. You are able to pick up form other liars how to form good lies.

2. Expressionless Liar: You have a serene calm on your face, you'r able to lie through your teeth at times. Depending on the situation you are in, you are able to get away sixty if not seventy-five percent of the time. However, those who are able to read through the lies are able to determine whether you are lying or not so watch what you say

-Wall
1. The mental door: You have a good enough mind to block out things from the simplest of readers and are able to hide your emotions unless you come in contact with those who are able to read you clearly. You'r beginning to understand the psychology of your own emotions (interpersonal) and you try to keep it at lock so that you're able to focus on somethings but it is not hard for you to lose focus

2. The mental blockade: The mind has begun creating walls over the emotions that you have, you appear to have a cold appearance and at times, you radiate a aura of distance. People have a hard time reading you, not only through a personal perspective but your physical perspective as well. A person might have a difficult time in reading you as an opponent, your next move is very hard to predict.

N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"

    Birth Date: (Spring, Summer, Winter, Fall / Day)
    Home Village/Current: Ex Konoha Ex Mizu
    Parents: Deceased
    Siblings: Deceased
    Sensei / Role Model: His father
    History:Similar to all other ninja and in turn persons Acheron had to have been born. The joining of two chuunin, one a kirigakure woman and the other a konoha senju, is what lead to the birth of this young man. The first year of his life was spent under the care of both of his loving parents within the village hidden in the leaves where his father was born although Acheron's birth place remains a secret even to him. His first year of life, although not memorable to him due to being an infant, was quite uneventful. Everyday the same routine proved dominant over his young life. Awake, suckle his mother's bosom for sustenance, the receiving of cleaning, and of course sleep. These were the relatively good days of his life and those came to a sever end on the first anniversary of his death. The blood spilled changed everything.

    The first event that proved unfortunate for the young Mr. Parthenopaeus was the arrival of a tracker ninja. It was one sent by the mizukage in an attempt to retrieve Acheron's mother. Normally that wouldn't be a problem for the woman, but the fact that her guard was down and that she was looking for the young male who had waddled off in some odd direction left her abnormally open. Like many other days in Konohagakure it was sunny, warm, vibrant, but there was some type of chill in the forest that even the most hardened of men couldn't shake. The toddler that waddled about couldn't have noticed but he was being stalked by a predator, a ninja that knew who he was and how to use him for what he wanted. A baby, what sane man would use a baby you ask? None other than Taki Shujiko, execution extrodinaire.

    The lad had no chance if the man chose to attack him, but that was not his goal at all. His only task here was to ensure that the woman came back to the village hidden in the mist with no problems at all. In a nut shell he was not to die and not to cause any casualties which seemed out of his area of expertise. That would not stop the greedy ninja from undertaking the mission and that he did. Now presented with the opporotunity he needed after traveling for days to get to the hidden leaf village without a paper trail the man was satisified. It would seem as if the Ninja Gods were smiling down at him with the presentation of such a gift as a young child to avoid any extra work than needed. There was only one unknown variable, an x factor it seemed.

    Taki had no idea who the lads father was and that in turn meant that he hadn't the slightest of ideas about the identity of the lover of the boy's mother, his target. Without that information missions such as these tended to get tricky no matter who or what was at stake whether it be a small amount or Ryo or a village's most kept secret. It was a matter of choice and since time was not on his side Taki decided that it would be best to grab the child now and that was what he attempted to do. Jumping at a sort of downward angle towards the small bundle of life there would have been the best route to take, but of course Taki chose the flashier route. In a display for figures that weren't palpable he jumped landing silently behind the child, his hands moving to grip.

    The moment his feet touched the ground a tree a few meters behind him rustled just a little bit and out from a limb shot a wooden spike that pierced through the man that tried to capture the young boy. Had he then the wits about him that he has not the young Parthenopaeus would have realized it a clone from the lack of blood and surpluses of white smoke. The fact of the matter was that these things were all irrelevant to him as his full attention was already given to a small butterfly fluttering past him, it's wings nearly glowing in the sunlight. Taki, the real taki, was studying from a nearby branch for the source of the spike that impaled his shadow clone. The mere thought was appauling to him, but he cast his rage aside momentarilly to search for the cause of his newfound head pains.

    He hated these headaches, but they would plauge him no longer as the man that Acheron had known as his papa beheaded the hunter ninja. The boy was too open here and his father knew it so that day he and the boy's mother came to an agreement to allow him to live and be raised under his grandfather under the alias of a son. The years past and the young Parthenopaeus remained duly ignorant of the deception that was cast over his life. It was a bit off to him that his father had white hairs while the fathers of the other children sported vigor and vitality, but things like questioning were beyond the young man. The joy of his enrollment in the hidden mist's academy was soon overshadowed by the sheer delight that his "parents" felt about his becoming a genin and choice to follow in his "father" and late "older brother's" footsteps in becoming a medical ninja. A year later and many mental scars later he became a chuunin and from there his story continues, but that is where my knowledge of the young Parthenopaeus and his past comes to an end. He is now the age of seventeen and flourishing in the mist village.

    Yawning the young shinobi grabbed the hilt of his blade bringing it back into it's place at his waist and in it's sheath, swinging it in the midst of said action to free teh blood of the elderly butler from it. The young mister Parthenopaeus as he had liked to call him had now caused an end to the older male's life and with that a solid and swift end to the bullshit that he was writing in that book of his. To dare say that Acheron was a part of the Senju clan was preposterous. He was what most liked to refer to as an Uchiha when in all honesty he was neither of the bickering and rivalsome clans. He was a Parthenopaeus blessed with the gift of the sharingan from the sage of six paths.

    The other titles meant nothing to the young shinobi. He was raised a Parthenopaeus and a medic who also specialized in taijutsu and that was that. His sword skills were above average and his killing of the man that he had met only once prior to his slaying had awoken Acheron's Mongekyou sharingan. He left his village, the village hidden in the mist, to freelance things, which he did for a while developing his skills, but he needed a more stationary space and therefore joined the akatsuki. It is there where he sits waiting for action or orders to follow and for fun to be had. The only thoughts of his past life remained with the young woman he had come to know and love, the only one he could say that for whom was still living, lightning. He had met her on a day in which it both snowed and stormed, the beautiful streaking lightning against the gray sky was forever etched into his mind and she was the only one he ever allowed to call him snow.


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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Mar 26, 2012 12:27 pm

I see no more issues since you corrected what i pointed out, approved
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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Mar 26, 2012 1:26 pm

couple of problems I have spoted what village are you in or are you akatsuki, next you have 4 speciality's remove one also you just put S rank if a village you need a rank

if you missing you need put your former village.

Your weapon have blaze for its element which is an advanced element, I know I have blaze in my sword but it comes from kkg thats where it come from we are not allowing advanced elements fused into swords
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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Mar 26, 2012 2:16 pm

He is part of the akatsuki kaira, just clearing that up, and sorry, I did not know about the no advance element for the weapon stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Mar 26, 2012 2:38 pm

somea lot of jutsu on your app are ninjutsu I would remove taijutsu and keep ninjutsu as you will need it for a lot of things
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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Mar 26, 2012 3:26 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Mar 26, 2012 4:55 pm

Name: Acheron
Clan Type: Shinobi
Kekkei Genkai:Sharingan Mangekyou Sharingan----The name on here needs to be Uchiha. Your name does not need to be however if you are hiding your identity.

Jutsu Name: Kamui
Rank: C-S
Element: N/A
Type: Attack
Description: The ability to create a portal of varying size to teleport an object into a different dimension. The size and therefore chakra usage of the technique is varied by both the user and the situation. Kamui consumes a large amount of chakra to perform, especially in Kakashi's case, as his non-Uchiha body is predominantly not compatible with the eye; meaning it causes Kakashi more strain or fatigue than an Uchiha would experience when using the technique.----No this should be on the banned list. Plus you already have 2 single eye techniques and Susanoo.

Jutsu Name: Sixteen Pillar Binding----A rank no S

I'll look more in a second.
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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Mar 26, 2012 6:44 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeTue Mar 27, 2012 4:05 pm

De-approved

Godlike speed denied = Requirment states taijutsu Weaponry as a dominant speciality
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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeTue Mar 27, 2012 4:07 pm

Unapproved

Name: Godlike Speed
Rank: S
Type: Physical
Description: The user must make an extra long training post for this speed. Must have a training topic of 4000 words. Must have Taijutsu or Weaponry as a Dominate specialty. The user is unseen by anyone and moves in the blink of an eye, 35% faster then ninja of their rank. This technique is rare and takes lots of training. Needs Super Speed. Must also have permission from 2 Admin.

Must be trained IC, must had tai or Weaponry as dominate specialty.
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PostSubject: Re: Acheron Parthenopaeus   Acheron Parthenopaeus Icon_minitimeMon Apr 02, 2012 5:34 pm

•Jutsu Name: Tsukiyomi
Rank: S
Element: Kkg
Type: Offensive, Doujutsu
Description: Tsukuyomi is one of the most powerful genjutsu in existence. It is unique to the Uchiha clan and only those with the Mangekyō Sharingan can perform it. It is said to represent the "Spiritual World and Darkness", the antipode to Amaterasu, a ninjutsu of similar power.

Tsukuyomi requires eye contact to be performed. When executed, the technique traps the target in an illusion that is completely controlled by the user. Itachi's prowess with the technique has allowed him to alter the perception of time with ease within the genjutsu to make it seem to last for days when in fact it only lasts a few seconds. This allows him to torture the target for what seems like days on end, causing mental trauma that will render them unable to fight for an extensive period of time

need genjutsu as a spec you dont have it at all
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