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All have been laid to rest, all expect memories. Throughout the years, shinobi - men and women - have learned how to preserve the memories of thousand of great shinobi that have lived, and then have passed. Though, they never managed to gain the memories of Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, and Uchiha Sasuke. These three ninjas are wildly known as the Three Heroes of the world. They are the mirror images of their legendary Sannin teachers, and touched everyone's life in some sort of way. Their memory though has been scattered across the world, and the pieces of their chakra find themselves locked away in certain men and women, wildly known as the Kages of today. They are the shadows and guardians of today's new era, and they seem to wait for something to happen. They await for Madara Uchiha to return, the Fourth Shinobi War had been created by none ever than Obito Uchiha, Kakashi's old friend whom he thought had died. In this war, numerous men and women died trying to protect all that they thought was right and true, in the end - Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke had perished by giving up their lives to kill Madara and Obito Uchiha. Their chakra awoken a sleeping God, whom took the combined power of the ten bijuu, kurama and the eight tailed bijuu's life source and basically recreated life anew. These memories however, are gone, and cannot be recreated or found in any memory book, or even in text. This story is being told through the combined chakra fragments of the Legendary Heroes that each Kage takes upon their death and inserts into a crystal fragment. However, life as everyone now knows, is finally changing. Kazengakure and Hyozangakure had finally came to an agreement of forming a grand alliance between their villages, rumored that they were related by distant cousins, this alliance would be greater than any had ever seen. The day of the treaty being signed, and thus the festival on the island of Heiwa, a new danger had awaken that day. The Sage of Six Paths was unable to keep a dark entity in slumber from the grave and beyond; a new five tailed bijuu - the Hydra - had awoken. In a fit of rage and unknown, the Hydra destroyed half of the festival grounds, killing more than five thousand civilians and shinobi alike. The Bijuu set it's eyes on the building where the witnessing six kages were located, and destroyed the entire building. Three months had passed, and Sannins of each village filled the spots of the Kages, as many hoped that one day there would be news that someone had survived the attack. Only the Hyozangakure's kage had returned, apparently unaware of what happened. Because of this, many of the villages have returned hostile towards each other, many blaming Hyozengakure for the attack that killed each of the Kage's. Slowly, men and women of each village are elected to fill the Kage spots of each of the village, alliances are being forged and mended. But can anyone form a great alliance to take down Hydria, and once again, scatter all of the tailed beasts across the world?

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PostSubject: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only)   Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 24, 2012 7:41 pm

"My grandfather told me of a very special person."



Name: Benjamin
Middle: Franklin
Surname: Katsuyo
Age: 190
Gender: Transvestite
Sexual Orientation: Animals

Overall Appearance: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo stands at eleven feet seven inches tall and ways one hundred and forty pounds. He has dark scaly skin which is covered in scars. His eyes are crimson in color, because he keeps his mangekyou sharingan activated at all times. He wears a bandana over his bald head, which hides his byakugan which is his third eye. He has long pointed ears, which fit his dragon-esque face perfectly. Benjamin is the perfect specimen of a dragon-human hybrid and often flashes his razor sharp teeth to scare little children away.
Overall Persona: I am one blood thirsty soul. I absolutley love to kill little children and eat their dead bodies. Another thing that I love to do is kidnap little girls, around the age of 11, and force them into child slavery making them do everything i tell them aside from those two things i enjoy long walks on the beach on nights filled with murder and mayem I hate alcoholics and gay people. It just isnt normal to be an alcoholic and i dont like getting hit on my gay guys. another thing i hate are body builders. it doesnt make sense because it doesn't make them anymore attractive
Fears: snakes bodybuilders moon crashing into the earth genjutsu
Likes: murder mayem rape pillage causing distruction long knights filled with screaming of pain
Dislikes: villages
Catch Phrase: fuck yea true story umad bro? y u no die, rizard




I.D. U N K N O W N



"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."



Village: God Village
Rank: God Kage
Bloodline: Mangekyou Sharingan, Byakugan, Gods: Creation and Destruction
Elements: Fire, Wind, Earth, Water, Lightning, Lave, Black lightning, Blaze, Sand
Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Puppetry, Weaponry, Sealing Arts, Healing, Kenjutsu




B L O O D . T Y P E



"He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."



Name: Uchiha
Clan Type: shinobi
Kekkei Genkai: sharingan
Clan Element: blaze
Clan History: you know the story




P A S S E D & L E A R N E D



"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

Elemental Jutsu[s]
Fire Release -Katon-

Jutsu Name:Fire Ball
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:20ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This is like the Uchiha original form of fire ball jutsu, like the Frozen Ice Ball, it blows out concentrated chakra but is now in the form of fire.

Jutsu Name:Single Fire Dragon
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:20ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This attack allows to concentrate chakra in the users body, of which is concentrated in the right or left arm, in doing so, a blaze of fire chakra forms on the arm and transforms into a fire dragon about arm length ready to attack. When the dragon is fired the dragon grows in size.

Jutsu Name:Twin Fire Dragon
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:20ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: ike the Single Fire Dragon Jutsu but this time requires both arms

Jutsu Name:Demon Flare
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range: 10ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to exhert chakra into a specific area, of which when the hand seal, Rat, is used then where ever the chakra is exherted to generates a large blast of fire, flaring from the ground.

Jutsu Name:Fire Wall
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:CLose
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu is a fire form of the water wall jutsu, this jutsu like the water wall can be manipulated by thinking of where to block. The purpose of the Water Wall is block all projectiles thrown at the user, however the water wall can not withstand certain elemental attacks like lightning or earth. The Fire Wall is the same as the water wall but it can not stand water and wind element attacks.

Jutsu Name:Fire Maze
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:Close
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu requires patience. First the user must use a kunai and draw on the ground with lines, either leaving carvings or markings on the ground, if in battle this could be very difficult. Once the lines are carved, the user with then generate chakra in the users hands to the ground. The markings will then exhert the chakra put in the ground and turn into lines of fire, which then form into large fire walls, and turn into a maze like form. This attack is great for throwing off an opponent, strategic withdraw, or a long chakra charge for the next jutsu.

Water Release -Suiton-

Jutsu Name:Misty Veil
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Full Area
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu is like Zabuza’s mist technique, this jutsu uses the water molecules in the area, and forms them to expan with chakra to turn into a heavy mist. This allows the user to eithe get ready to attack or silently kill.

Jutsu Name:Water Wall
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Close Up
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:As explained in the Fire Wall jutsu, the water wall protects the user from projectile attacks, but weak against Lightning and Earth.

Jutsu Name:Water Wave
Japanese styled.
Rank: e
Element: Suiton
Range: 50ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This attack requires a large body of water, of which once used the user can cause the large body of water to form into a tidal wave to attack the opponent, the user will not be caught in the attack, because once the wave heads towards the user the wave splits in two avoiding the user.

Jutsu Name:Water Void
Japanese styled.
Rank: e
Element: Suiton
Range: 40ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a huge void of which summons a large body of water to pour out in a surge which its pressure could crush bones if done properly, this was used in the fight against Zabuza and Kakashi.

Jutsu Name:Water Prison
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Close Up
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This attack is used to capture ninja in a water sphere of which requires the user to have their hand inside the sphere to keep the binding closed.

Jutsu Name:Water Clone
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Full Range
Type: What type is it?
Description:These are an exact replica of Zabuza’s Water clones can fight, but once defeated revert to a water like state.

Jutsu Name: Chakra Scapple
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Goshinjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to transact in surgery on a fallen ninja of which needs medical attention for chakra implants.

Jutsu Name: Chakra Implant
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Goshinjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to use chakra scapple to a whole new degree, this jutsu allows the user to replace an important organ in the ninjas body with a chakra organ which generates off of chakra, this will allow the ninja to still live but chakra will be sealed from being used and the ninja would no longer be able to use ninjutsu.

Jutsu Name: Regrowth
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Goshinjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to slowly regenerate wounds from ever being done on the user’s body..

Weaponry-

Jutsu Name: Shadow Shuriken
Rank: B
Element: None
Range:10ft
Type:Kenjutsu
Description:This allows the user to use chakra to wield a demon shadow shuriken which weighs alot, this is a common jutsu tought to the Jounin in the leaf village.

Jutsu Name: Crescent Moon Slice
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Kenjutsu
Description:This is an attack of which requires a katana, this attack uses precise precission of which the user doubles in image, and vanishes, the user will be found in the sky and will slice down imediately with katana single edge strike to the shoulder. This is a Leaf village, Jounin Jutsu.

Jutsu Name: Weapon Re Equip
Rank:E
Element: None
Range:CLose
Type: Kenjutsu
Description:his attack allows the user to summon forth any weapons they have in storage in a scroll, this is Kenjutsu Specialist Technique this is like Tenten technique but instead of various weapons it is only different sword styles that can be summoned being a kenjutsu.

Jutsu Name: Hurricane Whip
Rank: E
Element: None
Range: Close
Type: Kenjutsu
Description:This attack requires a rose like whip sword (sword that deattached like a chain and is a bladed sword whip), when in use the user will spin in a circle as if dancing, the whip will spin violently and will proceed in attacking the opponent in a fast motion.

Ninjutsu

Jutsu Name: Substitution
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This allows the user to substitute themselves with someone else or something else with speed.

Jutsu Name: Transformation
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:THis jutsu allows the user to transform into the same image for a certain time of another person, this is learned in the academy in order to pass.

Jutsu Name: Release
Rank: A
Element: none
Range:WHole Area
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:A jounin style jutsu of which allows the user to release themselves out of any Genjutsu that can cause harm to them.

All Wind jutsu

All lighting jutsu

[font=georgia]Doton: Yomi Numa - Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Range: All Ranges.
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: By changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

Jutsu Name: Doton: Doryūheki - Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defense. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water.

Jutsu Name: Doton: Kage Bunshin - Earth Release: Shadow Clone
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Range: Supplementary
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This technique creates a shadow clone made of mud of the user. Since its made of mud, it can continue to reform and mould itself back to its original shape. After reverting to mud, it can hold the opponent in place.

Jutsu Name: Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Hiding like a mole technique.
Rank: C
Element: Doton
Range: All ranges
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.

Jutsu Name: Doton: Doryūkatsu - Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Range: All ranges
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: By flowing concentrated chakra from one's palms into the Dragon Veins flowing underground, one can tear the earth apart, creating large chasms. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack.

Jutsu Name: Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Range: All Ranges
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks and then move in and out of other rocks undetected.

Jutsu Name: Doton: Ganban Kyū Earth Style: Stone Plate Coffin
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Range: Close-Mid
Type: Offensive
Description: This technique allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

Jutsu Name: Doton: Shinjū Zanshu no Jutsu - Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Range: All ranges
Type: Offensive
Description: This technique conceals the user underground and drags the object of their attack down into the earth, robbing them of their freedom. In addition, the person pulled under cannot move, thus allowing the user to pop out and start another attack.

all lava jutsu

all god jutsu

Non-Elemental Jutsu[s]
rasengan

all shadow clones and variations


]Jutsu Name:
Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Range: Short to Mid
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This technique exerts an hallucinatory effect upon the eyesight, effectively blinding the opponent. No matter how skilled an opponent may be, they are forced to wait helpless in this world of darkness, as this technique allows the user to attack unseen. Although it negates sight, it does not stop the other senses.

Jutsu Name:
Temple of Nirvana
Rank: A
Range:All
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A genjutsu that generates a fluttering rain of sleep-inducing, illusory white feathers. Whomever sees them as they fall, piling up and covering the whole target area will experience Eden-like bliss and fall into a state of tranquil slumber. No matter how much one resists the hypnotic spell the desire to sleep is instinctive, and there's no fighting it. However, an experienced shinobi will be able to dispel the genjutsu before it takes effect.

Jutsu Name:
Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death
Rank: B
Range:Short
Type: Gnejutsu
Description: This is one of the genjutsu that have been passed down since ancient times in Konohagakure. The user first disappears from plain sight in a mist-like fashion in order to approach the target without being detected. Once close enough, the target will then be completely robbed of their mobility as they see the mirage of a fast-growing tree coiling itself around them. Given that the subject remains conscious, this technique proves extremely efficient for information-gathering. Once the target is immobile, the user can then attack the enemy, usually after emerging from the trunk of the tree.

Jutsu Name:
Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique
Rank: C
Range: Large
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This jutsu causes the illusion of a tremendous ball of fire falling from the sky into a designated area.

Name: Black Genjutsu: Demonic Dancing Shadow technique.
Rank: A
Range: All ranges
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Sketh being the creator of Black Genjutsu techniques, also made this technique as well. Much like "bringer of darkness" technique, the world around the person and the user become pitch black, this is when the real effect comes in. Sketh is able to manipulate the shape and form of the shadows within the blackness to create multiple odd looking beast similar to that of a large cat and wolf made of shadows. Their main use is attacking their given target which if touched can cause for the black shadows to spread throughout the opponents body, eventually consuming them and causing extreme pain,Sketh even comments that the pain should be like being stabbed by a thousand needles at once, but not dying from it. If the enemy attempts to destroy the creatures by slicing them, they will merely reform back into there shape using their shadows.



Jutsu Name:
Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: C
Range: All
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A genjutsu that allows one to trick others into mistaking the place they're in for another. This technique's main feature is that it can be cast over an extensive surface, therefore any and all who step into the illusion's area of effect will fall under the spell. That said, it might not work so well on people who are well-versed or otherwise skilled in genjutsu.

Jutsu Name:
Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D-A
Range: Short
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. If the mental image is a gruesome one, the shock will be accordingly great.

Name: Ephemeral
Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Itachi - as well as sketh - seemingly activates this technique by simply pointing at his target. When the technique was used on Naruto Uzumaki, crows flocked from Itachi and turned into shuriken that bombarded him, and then attempted to put him to sleep. When he resisted the sleep command, Naruto then experienced the sensation of his body parts turning into his closest friends who then tortured him psychologically. Multiple Illusions can be summoned by this genjutsu, making it very effective.

Name: Magen: Nijū Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu - Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Genjutsu
Description: This technique places another illusion within another illusion created by the user. If and when the target dispels the first illusion, they will not realise that a second is in place.

Name: Time Reversal technique
Rank: C
Range: Close
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique puts the target in a state of reverse hypnosis, allowing them to remember details that they otherwise would not. The target will comply with interrogation, but seems to retain his or her personality while under hypnosis. For example, when the ANBU used this technique to bring back Naruto's memories about his conversations with Gennō, Naruto was more specific about the ramen he shared with the old man rather than their conversations, which the ANBU were asking about.

Iya Eda Kataki no Jutsu [Melting Body Technique]
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Genjutsu
Description: The target sees and feels his limbs slowly melting off his body, making them think they cannot use them anymore.

Name: Sakujō Kibō no Jutsu [Illusionary Plants]
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Genjutsu/Supplementary
Description: This Genjutsu causes the target to see small flowers and weeds sprout up from the ground and walls and then, with great speed, capture them with their vines, squeezing them so tight that it feels as if they cannot get away.

Name: Hibiki no Jutsu [Phantom Voice Technique]
Rank: C
Range: Short - {within earshot to carry out conversations} Mid - to mess with the targets mind
Type: Genjutsu/Supplementary
Description: A ghostly voice begins to emerge in the targets mind, saying whatever the user pleases. The voice gets so loud that the target cannot hear anything but the voice. It would seem as if the voice was coming from the surrounding areas, then begin to multiply into multiple voices, each voice would repeat what the user said repeatedly (if wanted) or it could be used to carry out a conversation. .

Name: Kagai Bunshin no Jutsu [Mirror Clone Technique ]
Rank: C
Range: All ranges {within eyesight}
Type: Genjutsu/Supplementary
Description: An alteration of the Bunshin technique, creating a Bunshin of the user that appears to actually be able to fight. In reality the target fighting nothing but in the target’s mind he really is fighting a copy of the user, and the copy will not go away until he figures out how to destroy it, or dispels the genjutsu. This is good for exhausting their target in order to destroy the copy. Since this is a hands-on-genjutsu, so to speak, the target can actually feel the hits the clone does to them since the brain actually believes they are fighting the user of said technique. This allows the real user to move about unseen or heard.

Name: Botsuraku Gozō no Jutsu [Diminishing Air Technique]
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Type: Genjutsu/Supplementary
Description: An illusion in which makes the target believe that the air supply around them is slowly diminishing, making them feel as if they were really in a situation that they cannot breath. Because the mind is convinced there is no air the target’s mind restricts them from breathing. This instills fear in the target and if isn’t dispelled eventually can cause the target to faint. This is also a weak genjutsu that is easy to break if the opponent can calm themselves. Easily broken and mostly used to distract or weaken the enemy.

Name: Higai Mōsō no Jutsu [Paranoia Technique]
Rank: D
Range: Mid
Type: Genjutsu/Supplementary
Description: An illusion which makes people become skeptical to their teammates for they think they are going to betray them. This causes them to fight amongst each other making them easy targets. This can target up to four people at once.However, this is a relatively weak genjutsu and can easily be broken even without a "Kai" release if the opponents/People can work it out.

Name: Katsubō no Tsumi [Painful Lust]
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Type: Genjutsu/Supplementary
Description: A physiological Genjutsu on which the enemy is dominated by a natural or sexual need or even a high pain. This is done by stimulating the brain with either images of the opposite sex {sometimes the same sex...}, or twisting their desires into making them think they want to feel pain. The enemy will do whatever it takes to satisfy its need, even if it means leaving the fight or seriously injuring themselves.

Name: Nentōgyō [Phantom Hold]
Rank: A
Range: Close-Mid
Type: Genjutsu/Supplementary
Description: This genjutsu is the same like all genjutsu, it targets the brain, causing an enemy to lose all train of thought, then the real illusion kicks in as they will begin to see several ghostly hands appear out of the air and environment around them and hold them in place, essentially freezing them in place. Shinobi who are aware of the genjutsu are able to think but their body is unable to respond. Does not prevent releases, however.

Name: Magen ~ Kasegui no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion ~ Shackling Stakes)
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Close/eye contact
Element: N/A
Description: Magen ~ Kasegui no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the clan member will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion. This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom.

Name: Magen ~ Kyouten Chiten (Demonic Illusion ~ Mirror Heaven and Earth Change)
Rank: A
Range: Self.
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user decrypts a genjutsu that has been applied onto them and casts back a technique with identical effects onto the opponent. It's a form of illusion reversal, but in order to instantly read through a technique and cast it in return, the Sharingan's power is necessary. As genjutsu is initially used to confuse the enemy, this technique, which sends it right back to its caster, deals a high amount of mental damage, more than anything else.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body
Rank: B
Range: Eye Contact
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This genjutsu requires the Sharingan and eye contact to be activated. The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The technique will make it harder for the target to move properly.

Name: Body shedding
Rank: S
Range: Self
Type: Supplementary
Description: Used after sustaining massive injury, or simply to escape from a seemingly inescapable attack, this technique allows the user to regurgitate a new body from their mouth, new clothes, complete with any lost limb being regenerated and all wounds healed, much like a snake sheds its skin. This technique requires a large amount of chakra, as Sasuke's reservoir was drained greatly when he used it to escape Amaterasu. Sketh can use it a total of three times during a fight.

all fuuinjutsu

all taijutsu

summons tiger, toads, snakes, hawks, eagles, and dragons





W E A P O N



Name: Gods Scythe
Rank: SSSSS
Fused Element: Wind, Fire, Water, Lightning, Earth, lava, god
Description: this scyth can be used to create mountains or destroy them to ceate valleys and destry them to make rivers and make them try up
Origin: Forged it himself on God Mountain


[SC] SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS.

Godlike Speed

Godlike Strength

Bijuu level chakra

godlike chakra control


[SC] TRAITS.

Master weaponsmith

diplomat

supercomputer

learning master



N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"


Birth Date: spring 666
Home Village/Current: None destroyed it for shits and giggles
Parents: murdered them in their sleep
Siblings: (None Murdered them in their sleep
Sensei / Role Model: Buddha
History: I was born on a night filled with bloodshed. Including my mothers. I was borned from her hanging corpse after she had been raped repeatedly. I was found three days later by my foster parents who brought me home and fed me. by age two i was already halfway through mastering my sharingan and already mastered most ninjutsu known. blah blah blah i entered the acaemy at the age of 4.

i spent three months as a genin befor ebeing promoted to chuunin without having to attend that idiotic chuunin exams.

i spent two years as a chuunin before becoming a special jounin and a further 2 months as a tokebetsu jonin before being promoted to a full fledged jonin.

I spent four years as a jonin before being made an ANBU and began killing people for the kage. this was my favorite time as a ninja. soon i grew fed up with the god kage and killed him and his ANBU while they slept. I then assumed the mantle of God King and began making plans to attack the villages. That was over 170 years ago. Now im ready to begin my plan and take over the world.
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PostSubject: Re: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only)   Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 24, 2012 8:59 pm

First off the app is not in format, this would need to be fixed. Now then onto more important matters starting with the starter

Name: Benjamin
Middle: Franklin
Surname: Katsuyo
Age: 190
Gender: Transvestite
Sexual Orientation: Animals

Overall Appearance: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo stands at eleven feet seven inches tall and ways one hundred and forty pounds. He has dark scaly skin which is covered in scars. His eyes are crimson in color, because he keeps his mangekyou sharingan activated at all times. He wears a bandana over his bald head, which hides his byakugan which is his third eye. He has long pointed ears, which fit his dragon-esque face perfectly. Benjamin is the perfect specimen of a dragon-human hybrid and often flashes his razor sharp teeth to scare little children away.
Overall Persona: I am one blood thirsty soul. I absolutley love to kill little children and eat their dead bodies. Another thing that I love to do is kidnap little girls, around the age of 11, and force them into child slavery making them do everything i tell them aside from those two things i enjoy long walks on the beach on nights filled with murder and mayem I hate alcoholics and gay people. It just isnt normal to be an alcoholic and i dont like getting hit on my gay guys. another thing i hate are body builders. it doesnt make sense because it doesn't make them anymore attractive
Fears: snakes bodybuilders moon crashing into the earth genjutsu
Likes: murder mayem rape pillage causing distruction long knights filled with screaming of pain
Dislikes: villages
Catch Phrase: fuck yea true story umad bro? y u no die, rizard

I believe benjamin franklin is not allowed due to being an actual historic person, the surname is fine
Age can not be 190, a ninja at that age would be remarkable but none the less impossible.
Transvestite is not a gender, male or female are the only genders this needs to be changed
Animals is not a sexual orientation its actually a noun Beastiality or Furry is a sexual orientation
It is not even humanly possible to be 11ft tall and 7inches
Now then he can only have Uchiha, Hyuuga, or dragon-hybrid ability not all three seeing how that is god mod.
Thing about the persona, this is not a dating site your interests have no meaning to the site, only your characters persona, however you are really morbid I and I suggest you getting help
fears, hmmm first no commas so it seems like a run on... second i assure you there are no body builders on here so that is rather weird.
likes, has the same problem with the comas, oh nights not Knights, night is like the opposite of sun, Knights are stereotypical armored heros.
Dislikes, thats okay i guess i would like a bit more dislikes
Catch phrase, first off rude, and the last one makes no sense, plus you need to say only one catch phrase, also not only that but spell your catch phrase probably.

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PostSubject: Re: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only)   Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 24, 2012 9:06 pm

Middle:

I.D. U N K N O W N



"Sad thing is, they weren't very important when starting out.."



Village: God Village
Rank: God Kage
Bloodline: Mangekyou Sharingan, Byakugan, Gods: Creation and Destruction
Elements: Fire, Wind, Earth, Water, Lightning, Lave, Black lightning, Blaze, Sand
Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Puppetry, Weaponry, Sealing Arts, Healing, Kenjutsu
There is no god village or god kage so denied
only one bloodline alowed
one element genin two element jounin, and kage and sanin three elements, advanced elements allowed if have a clan with one
Sanin are allowed three specialties not seven plus your rank doesn't exist so right now you can't have any till you fix

B L O O D . T Y P E



"He was from a rare family, I don't think they exist."



Name: Uchiha
Clan Type: shinobi
Kekkei Genkai: sharingan
Clan Element: blaze
Clan History: you know the story

Uchiha is a royal shinobi clan
though I may know the clan history, i will just go out and say, that actually I don't so please explain.
ALSO ARE YOU UCHIA, HYUUGA, OR DRAGON-HYBRID ONLY ONE ALLOWED PLEASE PICK K Smile

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Jutsu Section

P A S S E D & L E A R N E D



"He was strong, weapon and jutsu wise. Right?"

Elemental Jutsu[s]
Fire Release -Katon-

Jutsu Name:Fire Ball
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:20ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This is like the Uchiha original form of fire ball jutsu, like the Frozen Ice Ball, it blows out concentrated chakra but is now in the form of fire.

Jutsu Name:Single Fire Dragon
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:20ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This attack allows to concentrate chakra in the users body, of which is concentrated in the right or left arm, in doing so, a blaze of fire chakra forms on the arm and transforms into a fire dragon about arm length ready to attack. When the dragon is fired the dragon grows in size.

Jutsu Name:Twin Fire Dragon
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:20ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: ike the Single Fire Dragon Jutsu but this time requires both arms

Jutsu Name:Demon Flare
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range: 10ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to exhert chakra into a specific area, of which when the hand seal, Rat, is used then where ever the chakra is exherted to generates a large blast of fire, flaring from the ground.

Jutsu Name:Fire Wall
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:CLose
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu is a fire form of the water wall jutsu, this jutsu like the water wall can be manipulated by thinking of where to block. The purpose of the Water Wall is block all projectiles thrown at the user, however the water wall can not withstand certain elemental attacks like lightning or earth. The Fire Wall is the same as the water wall but it can not stand water and wind element attacks.

Jutsu Name:Fire Maze
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Katon
Range:Close
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu requires patience. First the user must use a kunai and draw on the ground with lines, either leaving carvings or markings on the ground, if in battle this could be very difficult. Once the lines are carved, the user with then generate chakra in the users hands to the ground. The markings will then exhert the chakra put in the ground and turn into lines of fire, which then form into large fire walls, and turn into a maze like form. This attack is great for throwing off an opponent, strategic withdraw, or a long chakra charge for the next jutsu.

Water Release -Suiton-

Jutsu Name:Misty Veil
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Full Area
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu is like Zabuza’s mist technique, this jutsu uses the water molecules in the area, and forms them to expan with chakra to turn into a heavy mist. This allows the user to eithe get ready to attack or silently kill.

Jutsu Name:Water Wall
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Close Up
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:As explained in the Fire Wall jutsu, the water wall protects the user from projectile attacks, but weak against Lightning and Earth.

Jutsu Name:Water Wave
Japanese styled.
Rank: e
Element: Suiton
Range: 50ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This attack requires a large body of water, of which once used the user can cause the large body of water to form into a tidal wave to attack the opponent, the user will not be caught in the attack, because once the wave heads towards the user the wave splits in two avoiding the user.

Jutsu Name:Water Void
Japanese styled.
Rank: e
Element: Suiton
Range: 40ft
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a huge void of which summons a large body of water to pour out in a surge which its pressure could crush bones if done properly, this was used in the fight against Zabuza and Kakashi.

Jutsu Name:Water Prison
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Close Up
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: This attack is used to capture ninja in a water sphere of which requires the user to have their hand inside the sphere to keep the binding closed.

Jutsu Name:Water Clone
Japanese styled.
Rank: E
Element: Suiton
Range:Full Range
Type: What type is it?
Description:These are an exact replica of Zabuza’s Water clones can fight, but once defeated revert to a water like state.

Jutsu Name: Chakra Scapple
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Goshinjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to transact in surgery on a fallen ninja of which needs medical attention for chakra implants.

Jutsu Name: Chakra Implant
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Goshinjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to use chakra scapple to a whole new degree, this jutsu allows the user to replace an important organ in the ninjas body with a chakra organ which generates off of chakra, this will allow the ninja to still live but chakra will be sealed from being used and the ninja would no longer be able to use ninjutsu.

Jutsu Name: Regrowth
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Goshinjutsu
Description:This jutsu allows the user to slowly regenerate wounds from ever being done on the user’s body..

Weaponry-

Jutsu Name: Shadow Shuriken
Rank: B
Element: None
Range:10ft
Type:Kenjutsu
Description:This allows the user to use chakra to wield a demon shadow shuriken which weighs alot, this is a common jutsu tought to the Jounin in the leaf village.

Jutsu Name: Crescent Moon Slice
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Kenjutsu
Description:This is an attack of which requires a katana, this attack uses precise precission of which the user doubles in image, and vanishes, the user will be found in the sky and will slice down imediately with katana single edge strike to the shoulder. This is a Leaf village, Jounin Jutsu.

Jutsu Name: Weapon Re Equip
Rank:E
Element: None
Range:CLose
Type: Kenjutsu
Description:his attack allows the user to summon forth any weapons they have in storage in a scroll, this is Kenjutsu Specialist Technique this is like Tenten technique but instead of various weapons it is only different sword styles that can be summoned being a kenjutsu.

Jutsu Name: Hurricane Whip
Rank: E
Element: None
Range: Close
Type: Kenjutsu
Description:This attack requires a rose like whip sword (sword that deattached like a chain and is a bladed sword whip), when in use the user will spin in a circle as if dancing, the whip will spin violently and will proceed in attacking the opponent in a fast motion.

Ninjutsu

Jutsu Name: Substitution
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:This allows the user to substitute themselves with someone else or something else with speed.

Jutsu Name: Transformation
Rank: E
Element: None
Range:Close
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:THis jutsu allows the user to transform into the same image for a certain time of another person, this is learned in the academy in order to pass.

Jutsu Name: Release
Rank: A
Element: none
Range:WHole Area
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:A jounin style jutsu of which allows the user to release themselves out of any Genjutsu that can cause harm to them.

FIrst these jutsu are copied from my jutsu list so you would have to learn from my character which isn't possible, oh and that fireball jutsu description is incorrect seeing how you stole it from my app second, these jutsu consist of mostly B-A rank jutsu, on the acception of the clones which are C as well as the academy jutsu Substitution and transformation.

All Wind jutsu

All lighting jutsu

all lava jutsu

all god jutsu
having all jutsu is not physically possible seeing how sanin are allowed 30 starters let alone there is no template for the jutsu

You have a very long list of jutsu that exceed the 30 limit, not only that but you have doton, fuuton, raiton, god(not existant), and ect you can only have three element but still I will say that your character rank is still void

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PostSubject: Re: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only)   Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 24, 2012 9:21 pm

Jutsu section revised


all fuuinjutsu

all taijutsu

summons tiger, toads, snakes, hawks, eagles, and dragons

Cant have all jutsu, again exceeds 30 limit and no template. also only allowed one summon not more than one, plus need a summon contract also ninjutsu/fuuinjutsu/taijutsu/genjutsu/ect only allowed three if your jounin but still your rank unknown fix
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PostSubject: Re: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only)   Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 24, 2012 9:25 pm

Near section
W E A P O N



Name: Gods Scythe
Rank: SSSSS
Fused Element: Wind, Fire, Water, Lightning, Earth, lava, god
Description: this scyth can be used to create mountains or destroy them to ceate valleys and destry them to make rivers and make them try up
Origin: Forged it himself on God Mountain
can only be rank S, too many forged elements, god element doesnt exist, the ability is way too strong such power is not allowed. also the word is dry. the origin is not possible god mountain does not exist

[SC] SPECIAL CHARACTERISTICS.

Godlike Speed

Godlike Strength

Bijuu level chakra

godlike chakra control
too many special characteristics, plus no explanation please fix in template


[SC] TRAITS.

Master weaponsmith

diplomat

supercomputer

learning master

this is too many as well also not in template please fix this

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PostSubject: Re: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only)   Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 24, 2012 9:30 pm

N O T . F O R G O T T E N


"Dad. You grew up with them, right? Mind telling me their story?"


Birth Date: spring 666
Home Village/Current: None destroyed it for shits and giggles
Parents: murdered them in their sleep
Siblings: (None Murdered them in their sleep
Sensei / Role Model: Buddha
First there is no day 666 change that, you sayed your village was god village but then again it doesn't exist.

History: I was born on a night filled with bloodshed. Including my mothers. I was borned from her hanging corpse after she had been raped repeatedly. I was found three days later by my foster parents who brought me home and fed me. by age two i was already halfway through mastering my sharingan and already mastered most ninjutsu known. blah blah blah i entered the acaemy at the age of 4.
at age two it is not possble to master that much considdering you can't even walk. Age four you are too young to be in the academy

i spent three months as a genin befor ebeing promoted to chuunin without having to attend that idiotic chuunin exams.
this is not possible as well way too short of a explanation


i spent two years as a chuunin before becoming a special jounin and a further 2 months as a tokebetsu jonin before being promoted to a full fledged jonin.
specail jounin is after jounin rank and tokebetsu joinn doesn't exist, also too short an explanation

I spent four years as a jonin before being made an ANBU and began killing people for the kage. this was my favorite time as a ninja. soon i grew fed up with the god kage and killed him and his ANBU while they slept. I then assumed the mantle of God King and began making plans to attack the villages. That was over 170 years ago. Now im ready to begin my plan and take over the world.
okay well not possible you be dead and your math is completely off also god kage and god king don't exist also too short an explanation

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PostSubject: Re: Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only)   Benjamin Franklin Katsuyo(Katt Uchiha Only) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 24, 2012 10:09 pm

You found 29 issues with the app

28 were actual issues.

Tokebetsu Jonin-http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Tokubetsu_J%C5%8Dnin
They are lower than jounin and are technically a rank just not on here-This is not a real issue.

That is the correct number of characteristics for for a kage level but they are too high of rank.

Again should be the correct number of traits but they are too high of rank

There were 28 issues.

You have 28/28

100% congratulations

I may have messed up the count but I believe you got them all.
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